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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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July 24, 2023 at 7:33 pm #88926
debbyc
ParticipantHi all, I’ve uploaded another practice script. I have been working on clarity and sounding more conversational rather than reading. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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September 12, 2023 at 11:07 am #90171
latyesemca
ParticipantIt definitely sounds conversational! You nailed that part. I would like to agree with edixon310 with room treatment. Maybe getting closer to the mic would help? But your clarity was also done very well.
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August 2, 2023 at 5:14 pm #89137
Brmassey
ParticipantHi Debby,
I think you sounded great. Your voice is strong and commanding. Be sure to watch micro pauses that aren’t needed between phrases and the flow as well as overemphasizing words like “Lifesaving” and “Everyday” and “No.”
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July 24, 2023 at 11:12 pm #88941
edixon310
ParticipantDebbyc, nicely done. You sounded very authoritative in your read, like you knew your material. My suggestion would be to check your rooms acoustics. Make sure you have as much treatment as you can to absorb the sound. It also sounds like you are standing off from your mic.
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July 24, 2023 at 2:24 pm #88917
Krista Andersen
ParticipantUploading a new practice recording. Appreciate any feedback on how it feels to you all! Thanks for your time!
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July 24, 2023 at 7:38 pm #88928
debbyc
ParticipantHi Krista. I love your voice..very clear and your pronunciation of the words and your pace is great. I would work on making it conversational. Who are you talking to about New York and Hudson Yard?
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August 7, 2023 at 3:39 pm #89231
Krista Andersen
ParticipantHi Debby – I appreciate the feedback. Been on vacation since posting so first chance I’ve had to check back. Thanks again for your time!
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July 21, 2023 at 7:10 am #88827
ScottCarr
ParticipantHi to all. Submitting two practice scripts. Any feedback will be appreciated (text included):
Leadership
Many people quickly assume that being a good leader means you’re a good manager and vice versa. The two concepts are actually quite distinct, and understanding that distinction can help you understand what it means to be good at either or good at both.
Leadership is setting the tone of an organization; the broad objectives and long term goals will come from the leader, and then managers need to execute on a plan to attain them. Leadership is not necessarily getting caught up in all the details, but rather setting the plan and inspiring people to follow them.-
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July 21, 2023 at 7:12 am #88829
ScottCarr
ParticipantThe Singularity
We are the masters of our planet. And for 200,000 years our intelligence has allowed us to rule unchallenged. But those days are drawing to a close. A new intelligence is rising … Artificial Intelligence. Our greatest scientists are on the verge of creating machines capable of independent thought. With intellects that could one day surpass our own. A singular event that will dramatically change life as we know it. What would a world dominated by super intelligent machines be like for us? Paradise? Or a nightmare?! Will it mean immortality … or extinction? One thing we do know. The process has already begun. The Singularity is near. And there’s no turning back.Attachments:
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July 20, 2023 at 8:40 pm #88821
Artist7
ParticipantHi, everyone! I would appreciate your comments on two short commercial practice reads. Thanks for your time!
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July 23, 2023 at 11:39 am #88897
Keith Paul
ParticipantHello, I tried listening for flaws, could not hear any. I read was very conversational, diction was right on point. the tone and delivery would keep the audience interested in the topic. Great Job.
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July 21, 2023 at 7:22 am #88833
ScottCarr
ParticipantI like the “smile” in your reads. You make both scripts sound like a fun experience, which is a good thing!
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July 19, 2023 at 8:56 pm #88796
Stephanie Bowens
ParticipantGreetings fellow awesome voice actors, brand new to this so don’t be too critical. it took me a while to submit from nervousness but in any event here we go! I’m working on my pace, how was it? did I sound engaging? Was it conversational? how was my breathing?
thank you 🙂
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July 20, 2023 at 10:16 pm #88824
Michelle Stout
ParticipantI think the pacing is a little too fast, which made some of the words a little hard to hear. Lovely voice. Keep up the good work!
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July 28, 2023 at 8:19 pm #89045
Stephanie Bowens
ParticipantThank you so much for the feedback! I’m going to work on that pace!
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July 19, 2023 at 7:45 pm #88792
tmanning.tix
ParticipantGreetings fellow voicers. Just looking for feedback on a couple of recordings. Any pointers are welcome.
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July 23, 2023 at 11:36 am #88896
Keith Paul
ParticipantHi, your tone on the commercials is very warm, but the script was not conversational enough, it sounded like you are reading.
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July 21, 2023 at 9:05 am #88838
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July 19, 2023 at 4:32 pm #88777
Keith Paul
ParticipantHello everyone, I’m back again looking for your feedback. I have uploaded two reads, please be as candid as possible. I really do appreciate your feedback
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July 21, 2023 at 2:26 pm #88856
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantHey Keith, I thought the Campbells copy was right on point. Pacing was good, warm. It sounded lovely. My only suggestion would be to take the pause out after Introducing at the beginning of the piece.
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July 23, 2023 at 11:30 am #88895
Keith Paul
ParticipantThank you very much for your feedback, your point is well taken.
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July 17, 2023 at 8:45 pm #88698
debbyc
ParticipantHi all! I have uploaded a couple of narration reads and would appreciate any feedback that you have. I am hoping to sound conversational and sincere on the Allstate Insurance read. The pre boarding read…any and all feedback is appreaciated. Thanks in advance!
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July 19, 2023 at 4:36 pm #88781
Keith Paul
ParticipantHi, the All state read, the volume was low and it made it difficult to understand some of the words, The Boarding pass volume waa better and was able to hear all of the words. The boarding pass matched what is heard when boarding at the airport.
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July 16, 2023 at 9:23 pm #88632
Talia Hankin
ParticipantHi! I would be eager to hear any and all feedback on these two commercial reads. Thank you in advance!
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July 17, 2023 at 8:29 pm #88697
debbyc
ParticipantHi Talia, the beginning of the Spotify read was chopped off. Maybe take a beat before starting. I really loved the end…conversational and loved the tone of your voice. The Philips read was really nice!
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July 17, 2023 at 12:07 pm #88675
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantHey Talia, These both sound great! Great pace, clear diction, nice and conversational! My only suggestion would be for the Phillips commercial there is a pause at the beginning right after you say At Phillips. Maybe you could play with how the line would sound if you took out the pause. Great work! I have a Tilex commercial on here that I am working on my take 1 and take 2’s. Would love your feedback if you have a chance.
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