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Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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Hey all! Just doing some practice reads, feedback is always appreciated!!
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This is my first song separated into three parts
I am untrained and need feedback on how I can improve in every aspect
Don’t be shy to criticize what I did wrong-
Hi NYTE,
I’m not a professional singer, and I’ve only received minimal training in my life, but I would really suggest strengthening your current vocal range. A lot of people try to perform runs and hit high notes to make their singing appear more impressive when really it isn’t necessary. Having a strong foundation, and singing from your diaphragm is very important. Your chest voice is okay, but performing runs that you aren’t vocally ready for will throw you off-key. Practicing vocal scales will help you strengthen your current range and will help you expand it in the future. Lastly, make sure you’re counting in your head to remain on beat.
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A practice sample for narration. Welcome message of American Airlines (taken from the library here). Your feedback is requested, especially since I am recording in a new environment. Thanks !
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Good pacing overall. I like your voice for this genre, especially your lower tones. Clean up annunciation on words beginning with “pr-” like “presentation.” I think you’re doing well with ups and downs in pitch and you do it at the right places like the line “… aircraft on which you are flying.” Keep up the good work! Best///Greta
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Hey Everybody, Looking for feedback – help with this read. Thanks for listening and your feedback.
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I felt like the pacing was a little bit too fast, it’s okay to slow down in some reads, I did enjoy hearing your voice and felt like it was right, would definitely watch out for when you’re saying “Advil”, make sure you’re enunciating correctly on the letter D which can sometimes get lost. Overall keep up the good work!
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Hi Sherry! Nice reads! I especially like your flow on Exedrin and Crayola. Overall, clear tone and committed style on all. Six Flags could be even more WOW!. In Six Flags, watch out for your regional accent coming out on “adventure” as it sounded more like “ad-vin-ture.” On Crayola, you can soften the “r”s just a touch! Keep it up! Awesome job! /Greta
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Hi folks! I’m seeking feedback on these 3 commercial reads – specifically style, tone, and believability – as well as audio quality and sound treatment of my studio. Testing out some new equipment! Should I do any minor effects like normalizing or condensing? Thanks as always for your time! /Greta
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Hi greta,
Only listened to the first one. Sound is good.
There was some silence at the beginning, and I thought something was wrong with the file or my computer.
It sounds like you are reading. Get some acting in to it. At the beginning, when you are in trouble, let’s hear your frustration.
And then it dawns on you that you have this solution. Let’s hear that light bulb “ding” the first time you say it, like you did way at the end (which was pretty good, btw).
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More feedback please! haha. I’m stuck with this read on a certain intonation and pace, and it doesn’t sound quite right to me, would love any ideas :).
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Hey Adrianna,
Beautiful, natural tone. Your pacing is also great and relaxed which is spot on for this specific read. However, I noticed that you tend to fall off or fall a bit flat a bit towards the end of your sentences. Figure out what message needs to be communicated through the copy and which words, per sentence, highlight that message. For example, in your opening sentence, I would use a stronger infliction on “with opportunities to learn and thrive” since this is one of the key messages.
Also, in the second sentence, when you mention “with his skills and her talents,” I believe this would be a spot cutting to a scene of a boy and then a girl? – maybe try switching your tone to show the transition/comparison of subject.
Hope this helps 🙂
-tiana b
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