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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

    Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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  • #69698
    Sherry Newell
    Participant

    Hi all! Working on some homework, any and all feedback welcome! Thanks 🙂

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    • #69770
      Sheila Harris
      Participant

      Hi there. I thought you had great energy with the Crayola piece, especially since it’s centered around children. Nice job!

    • #69736
      Don Sack
      Participant

      Hey Sherry!
      The Crayola piece was very good! If there is no slate, slow down some and the the enunciation will be even clearer.
      Rock on!

    • #69731
      danielh04
      Participant

      Lovely reads Sherry! These reads definitely suit you and your voice. I was even smiling through the Six Flags and Crayola ones as you went on.

    • #69707
      suecat
      Participant

      Hey Sherry,
      Your voice is warm and friendly. Your performances were very nice. I could even hear your smile in the Crayola performance. Great work! I look forward to hearing more!

    • #69703
      greta_j
      Participant

      Hi Sherry! Nice reads! I especially like your flow on Exedrin and Crayola. Overall, clear tone and committed style on all. Six Flags could be even more WOW!. In Six Flags, watch out for your regional accent coming out on “adventure” as it sounded more like “ad-vin-ture.” On Crayola, you can soften the “r”s just a touch! Keep it up! Awesome job! /Greta

  • #69689
    greta_j
    Participant

    Hi folks! I’m seeking feedback on these 3 commercial reads – specifically style, tone, and believability – as well as audio quality and sound treatment of my studio. Testing out some new equipment! Should I do any minor effects like normalizing or condensing? Thanks as always for your time! /Greta

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    • #69737
      Don Sack
      Participant

      Hey Greta!
      Very nice, soothing voice. Not fer nuttin’ but I think you can cut down on gaps and pauses. I do it too thinking it has some sort of dramatic effect……na.
      Rock On!

    • #69717
      Shmuel
      Participant

      Hi greta,
      Only listened to the first one. Sound is good.
      There was some silence at the beginning, and I thought something was wrong with the file or my computer.
      It sounds like you are reading. Get some acting in to it. At the beginning, when you are in trouble, let’s hear your frustration.
      And then it dawns on you that you have this solution. Let’s hear that light bulb “ding” the first time you say it, like you did way at the end (which was pretty good, btw).
      You have a great voice, and wish you success!

      • #69720
        greta_j
        Participant

        Thanks! That’s perfect feedback!

  • #69684
    tianabarksdale
    Participant

    Hello All,

    Like many of you, I am seeking feedback couple of reads. Thanks in advance!

    -tiana b.

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    • #69688
      greta_j
      Participant

      Hi Tiana! Your pacing as a whole is great and nice to listen to. You have a very young and fresh sound. I would suggest watching the pacing of each individual word, making sure not to skip over words like “digitally.” Keep rockin’ it!

  • #69682
    adriannagregory11
    Participant

    More feedback please! haha. I’m stuck with this read on a certain intonation and pace, and it doesn’t sound quite right to me, would love any ideas :).

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    • #69687
      tianabarksdale
      Participant

      Hey Adrianna,

      Beautiful, natural tone. Your pacing is also great and relaxed which is spot on for this specific read. However, I noticed that you tend to fall off or fall a bit flat a bit towards the end of your sentences. Figure out what message needs to be communicated through the copy and which words, per sentence, highlight that message. For example, in your opening sentence, I would use a stronger infliction on “with opportunities to learn and thrive” since this is one of the key messages.

      Also, in the second sentence, when you mention “with his skills and her talents,” I believe this would be a spot cutting to a scene of a boy and then a girl? – maybe try switching your tone to show the transition/comparison of subject.

      Hope this helps 🙂

      -tiana b

  • #69680
    adriannagregory11
    Participant

    Would love some feedback on my recording for Sandals Resorts :). Much appreciated!!

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  • #69674
    EdSoliz
    Participant

    This is my third attempt as the site is being weird, I’m posting but don’t see the post after the fact; apologies if it looks like I’m spamming.

    Got some more homework. I’m working on slowing down and sounding more conversational which is tricky when you’re a fast talker. 😉

    For comparison, I’m including a second recording of the last script at my ‘normal speed.’

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  • #69648
    Don Sack
    Participant

    Greetings!
    Getting back into the swing so to speak.
    Here are four recordings, two each of the same; compare and comment?
    Rock On!

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  • #69637
    VernDavis5
    Participant

    Hello everyone,

    I’m trying to keep a certain flow with pauses while maintaining a tone of voice with little emotion. I’m not sure what other trials and errors I have to go through, but I would love to hear some input from you all!

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    • #69653
      Don Sack
      Participant

      Vern, Ditto on suecat’s comments. Move toward getting the recording much clearer and no back round noise. Edge can help with getting you going on a good recording atmosphere; also You Tube, eh?
      Rock On!

    • #69645
      suecat
      Participant

      Hey Vern,
      It sounded as if you had a different tone for each performance – I hope that was your intent. The volume was very low so I could barely hear you. It sounded as if there was a consistent hum in the mic and your voice sounded a bit slurred. The noise factor skewed your performance. So I look forward to hearing more.

  • #69632
    Official81
    Participant

    Hello Everyone! I am looking for some sound quality and editing feedback please and thank you in advance! The script is as follows, and the edits that I did on the read were: Removed breaths, removed spaces, removed plosives, and added a little speed to it. Please let me know what you think.

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    • #69646
      suecat
      Participant

      Hey, You have a very clear and smooth voice. I’ll agree with Bev, an increased tempo would make it sound more conversational. In the second performance, I could hear your deep inhale, I guess that’s not a big deal, since they can be deleted from the recording. As we’re instructed, choose the person you’re talking to and why you’re telling them this information, to create that believable conversation. Love your voice, keep posting.

  • #69629
    Bev
    Participant

    ok

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