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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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August 28, 2021 at 1:41 pm #70347
salmaperez001
ParticipantHello everyone! This is my first time posting here and I would really appreciate some feedback on my narration script recordings. Thank you!
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August 28, 2021 at 5:24 pm #70354
Notetaker32
ParticipantWelcome to the Forum! Thanks for posting. You have a nice voice. Across the three recordings, I few things I noticed include some breath noises and some unnatural breaks in the sentences. For example, from the Travel-Travelogues recording: “Offering the latest / and greatest…” Not seeing the script, it’s possible the scriptwriter wanted a break there?
You were able to switch your tone for your audience which was really nice.
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August 26, 2021 at 12:03 am #70328
mike_levelton
ParticipantHey everyone,
I’m getting to the end of my program and am looking to work on my conversational tone. I would love it if you could give me some feedback regarding these scripts.
Thanks!
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August 28, 2021 at 5:31 pm #70355
Notetaker32
ParticipantHey Mike,
I think the conversational tone is working for you pretty well, especially the Trendi and Ziploc recordings. I think any critiques I have of those would be nitpick stuff—good job on those! I felt the Atlanta Bread script felt more “read”. There were points in the audio track where it sounded like something was cut out, so I’m thinking you were trying to use lead-ins there? If not, it’s a great tool to use to keep that tone conversational, as if you were standing in front of the Atlanta Bread counter talking to a friend about what’s good there.Keep up the great work!
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August 25, 2021 at 4:27 pm #70319
Evette75
ParticipantHi – adding more reads for greatly appreciated feedback.
Blue Diamond Almonds
Get Your Good Going. Good is in every Blue Diamond Almond. Good is Contagious. Good adds flavor to our lives. Blue Diamond Almonds.Description of dish
Sesame Salmon with Green Onions and Lemon
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Swanson Flavor Boost concentrated broth. In easy-to-use packets. Add flavor instantly to skillet dishes, stir fries and more. Never make a less-than delicious dish again. Swanson Flavor Boost – Just what your skillet’s been waiting for. The secret is Swanson.Attachments:
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August 25, 2021 at 3:26 pm #70311
HelpYourself
ParticipantI would like feedback on my recording. I joined Edge Studio because I am a voice talent for my job and I would like to improve my skills. I would appreciate it if you would listen to my script and provide feedback.
Thanks so much.
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August 25, 2021 at 5:45 pm #70324
tfconf70
ParticipantFMLA spot was great. At the end of the service now spot, I heard “start” as “stort”, but it was minor, otherwise great job. Toastmasters spot also sounded great. Well done!
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August 30, 2021 at 2:41 pm #70394
HelpYourself
ParticipantThank you so much.
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August 25, 2021 at 3:24 pm #70308
HelpYourself
ParticipantI am a Healthy for Life Facilitator for the American Heart Association and I would like feedback on my recording. I joined Edge Studio because I am a voice talent for my job and I would like to improve my skills. I would appreciate it if you would listen to my script and provide feedback.
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August 25, 2021 at 2:57 pm #70305
SuperLuke
ParticipantHello everyone in the Feedback Forum. Now that my first animation demo is completed, I’m working on my narration skills and building muscle memory for being different characters on the spot for audiobooks. Please feel free to have a listen as I narrate the first Jack Reacher novel, ‘Killing Floor” by Lee Child. Comments and critiques are more than welcome.
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August 24, 2021 at 9:10 pm #70292
KSchladen
ParticipantHi everyone! This is my first time posting here, and I’m excited to become a part of the community.
I’ve taken a couple of voiceover classes at my local acting school and am working on becoming more experienced before I have a commercial demo put together. Could I please get some feedback on a few recordings I did as practice? I admittedly still find it a bit difficult to direct myself 🙂 I appreciate you all!
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August 24, 2021 at 6:13 pm #70288
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August 23, 2021 at 10:47 pm #70275
suecat
ParticipantHey Community, Please help me out with your feedback. Thank you!
Ziploc 2
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August 25, 2021 at 1:21 pm #70303
SuperLuke
ParticipantGood recording quality. But while listening to the ziploc commercial, I could hear a lot of pauses. And it felt like it was too slow. You may want to work on pacing yourself a little faster, to sound more dynamic for the commercial performance. Make yourself more desirable to your audience.
hope this critique helps
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August 26, 2021 at 9:35 pm #70339
suecat
ParticipantThank you so much SuperLuke! So grateful you listened and commented. I accept any and all of the help one can give! I will pay more attention to my pace! I’m loving this profession — it’s keeping me on my toes! Thanks again for listening and especially for your critique!
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August 23, 2021 at 8:23 pm #70271
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