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Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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Hey gang…!
Doing a little practice these days. Since it has been a while, thought I would see how you think I am doing.
Amendment3
In states across America,
Voters decide gambling issues.
Floridians once had that power, too.
With Amendment 3, we will again.
Amendment 3 restores control of gambling to voters
Not politicians
Not gambling lobbyists
YOU
That’s why gambling lobbyists are spending millions falsely attacking Amendment 3
They don’t want voters in charge
Florida’s top newspapers agree
Put the power in the hands of the voters
By voting YES to Amendment 3Voting Record
Election season is here.
Remember, who you vote for is secret
But whether you vote is public information
Your friends, family, and neighbors can look up your voting record
This year, whether by mail, early, or on Nov 2nd
Be sure to Make a Plan to Vote!
And after the election your voting record will be updated based on your participation on Nov 2nd
So, Vote, on or by Nov 2nd.I know the room is in the mix a lot more than I would like, so ignore that…!
Thanks for your time.
TimG
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He everyone, I just finished another round of homework and welcome any and all feedback. Thank you in advance!
Aetna/US Healthcare
No matter where we live–when it comes to something as important as health care–we all want the best. That’s why AETNA and US HEALTHCARE have joined forces to create a partnership that will set a new standard for quality and caring. AETNA and US HEALTHCARE. Raising the standard for your town, for your family, and for you.Beavers
The b****r builds its lodge out of intertangled twigs and sticks; as freezing weather nears, they plaster their lodge with mud, making a concrete layer that no predator can break through. During the early nineteenth century, the b****r pelt was the single most valuable commodity; the pelt being used for robes, coats, clothing trims, and top hats. (FWIW, the forum automatically starred out “eave” lol)American Airlines
Welcome aboard American Airlines coast-to-coast service. We’ll be happy to do everything possible to make your flight with us a most pleasurable experience. We’ll provide you with all the information you need to know about your flight, your destination, and the equipment on which you are currently flying. In addition, we are proud to present our American Airlines feature film presentation, for our transcontinental passengers. We’d like you now to remove the plastic insert found directly in front of you in the seat back pocket. Please review the safety information during the flight for your own protection, in the unlikely event of an in-flight emergency.-
Hi Christopher,
Your voice is so nice to listen to. I enjoyed all three, but especially the American Airlines most of all. The Beavers read could probably be less announcery…I guess it would be the right tone if you are giving a guided tour of a b****r habitat, but I think it might need a different kind of tone if it was a tv documentary. Anyway, you definitely are on point with your reads.
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Hi, just uploading two scripts for feedback. Thanks in advance!
Sandals
Somewhere in the Caribbean, there are 5-star luxury resorts where it’s all-inclusive, all the time. Sandals, where love is all you need. Because everything else is included. Call 1-800-Sandals.Honey Bunches of Oats
It’s amazing! I never thought one cereal would make my whole family stay for breakfast. HONEY BUNCHES OF OATS. There’s never been a cereal like it. With big corn flakes and crunchy bunches of oats. Finally … a cereal my whole family loves.-
nice work, Sheila. I did sense a hint of pause during the Sandals read at the 5-star luxury part that made the flow a little interrupted. The Honey Bunches read had good energy, like how you emphasized the keys components of ad.
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Hi all. Just dropping 2 more bits of commercial homework. Would love some feedback. Thanks!
Jimmy Deans TV Spot – Food and Beverage
Make any morning of the week feel like the weekend with the Jimmy Deans simple scrambles breakfast cup. Eggs, sausage, bacon n’ cheese all included in one simple cup.The Zebra – Car Insurance
Wendel lives in a bounce house. But he doesn’t wanna bounce around the internet to save on car insurance. So he uses the Zebra app to compare the top companies. Save an average of $440 on car insurance. Compare and save at TheZebra.com -
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Hi Community – adding some sample recordings, please provide feedback.
Secret –
Fresh & Aluminum Free. Sevret Aluminum Free helps ELIMINATE ODOR. Secret believes odor should be one less thing to sweat! Our ALUMINUM FREE formula helps ELIMINATE ODOR instead of just masking it with 3X MORE ODOR FIGHTERS And it’s FREE OF parabens, dyes and talc.Things We’re Talking About This Week – from a magazine
Everything bagel ice cream challenges taste buds – Jeni’s Splendid revealed a breakfast-inspired new flavor featuring garlic and onions with sesame and poppy seeds in cream cheese ice cream.Gabrielle Union and Dwayne Wade’s Shady Baby gets her own book – The couple wrote a children’s book featuring their little Instagram star, 2-year-old daughter Kaavia James – aka the adorably opinionated Shady Baby.
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My last three homework assignments, feedback would be much appreciated!
American Lung Assocation
For a kid with asthma, the joys of childhood quickly become living nightmares. A playful kitten, a cuddly puppy, a bouquet of flowers, all are potential triggers for terrifying attacks. Don’t let Asthma rob another childhood. Call 1800 Lung, USA. The American Lung Association.Lexus
This is not a time for business as usual.
Unless your business as usual has always been about putting people first.
Find out how your Lexus dealer can service your individual needs.BASF
At BASF, we don’t make the cooler, we make it cooler. We don’t make the jeans, we make them bluer. We don’t make the toys, we make them tougher. At BASF, we don’t make a lot of the products you buy. We make a lot of the products you buy better. BASF. -
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