[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[waninick]

Just a little something I threw together yesterday.

Let me know what you think.

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[Brmassey]

Your voice is great for this type of read–playful and authoritative! I would say watch your enunciation “jolted” kinda sounded a bit mumbled and you trailed off on “Leaf” at the end so be mindful to really drive home those “money” words!

[Brandyhart610]

May I have feedback directly related to the sound? Is this clos(er) to industry standard volume when you listen? Thank you all, I appreciate it!

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[Brandyhart610]

Still working on sound. Is this more clear? Attached.

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[Talia Hankin]

Hi! I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on these two commercial reads. Thank you so much in advance!

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[Earthbul]

Great inflection, nice cuts with great sound quality. You’re voice is perfect for this type of read. Great work.

[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated 🙂

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[James]

Sounds better then most commercials I hear on the radio! Quite good!

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[Alexander Wright]

Good day, fellow voice talents. Requesting feedback on this automotive commercial. Specifically on the tone of voice and whether the recording sounds too choppy or if the audio edits to remove noises/insert silence are noticeable. Thank you kindly in advance. Any other feedback, tips are welcome!

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[Earthbul]

I don’t believe the edits are a problem. The audio sounds fine to me.

[Earthbul]

Just enough urgency in the delivery where it’s quick but not rushed. Great pacing. Nice read.

[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback is appreciated.

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[Alexander Wright]

Would this be considered an infomercial? I like your eloquence and energy on this. It’s very evenly spoken throughout. Good pace.

[Earthbul]

I actually prompted chat gpt to write a script for a beard brand and p**f .. there it is. It was pretty long though so yeah, I’m with you on infomercial.

[Alexander Wright]

Wow. Interesting. I think it would take me quite a few takes to keep an even tone for a long read like that. You kept it quite even throughout.

[latyesemca]

This was fun to do! Short, sweet, simple and clean!

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[Alexander Wright]

Hi there! Nice job. it started off a little low on the volume, but then picked up. Towards the middle through the end it sounded a lot better.

[latyesemca]

Can easily say this was a tough read.

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[latyesemca]

I remember seeing these on the shelves in stores. Full circle moment!

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[latyesemca]

I would appreciate any feedback you could give me!

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[Earthbul]

Felt there could’ve been a little more emphasise on “So close” and in some other spots. Plus, I heard Quadro. Nice effort though, you have a pleasant sound.

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