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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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September 17, 2021 at 1:45 pm #70804
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September 17, 2021 at 9:45 am #70801
thevoiceofsean
ParticipantHaven’t been here since the “update”.
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September 16, 2021 at 5:25 pm #70781
Ondrea
ParticipantHi All!
I took a break from the VoiceOver world and am now back and hoping to record my demo at the end of the year or early next year. I have attached 3 files and am hoping to get a lot of feedback on what I can improve.
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September 17, 2021 at 3:08 am #70795
Shmuel
ParticipantSandals – I heard some reverb, you might want to check your space.
The read was at the same emotional level throughout. Vary it. “Somewhere in the Caribbean” should be wondering, and then “5 star luxury resorts” should sound like you are enjoying a wonderful item of food. And then “all included” should be like a mother saying “I’m going to take care of you”.
Wish you success, Ondrea, and welcome back !
Shmuel
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September 16, 2021 at 3:39 pm #70778
Troy C
ParticipantHi all! I’m back with a couple other narration reads. Trying to pay attention to pacing myself and letting the script breathe, while also trying to sound more conversational, but appropriate to the script. Trying to keep a lot of things in mind, haha.
Edison Documentary
Obsessed with his work and known to be an exacting boss, Edison had an ego as incandescent as his light bulbs, a sense of his own greatness that was undoubtedly justified. He was also incredibly competitive, willing to do whatever was required to ensure that his idea won out.Clovis Bray AI Technobabble
Can we trust an artificial intelligence to make the moral decision? The engineers of Clovis Bray conceived a solution during the development of our Warmind project. By relegating ethical decision-making to a Black Box Morality system, the Warmind instruments its own proprietary virtue quantifiers incomprehensible to even its own creators. The Warmind determines morality on its own terms, and by design we are blind to that process in order to preserve its objectivityAttachments:
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September 20, 2021 at 6:20 am #70842
mel82
ParticipantYour second piece was much more interesting because you made better use of higher and lower notes in your voice. Your emphasis of particular words sounds good, I would maybe try using more of the full scale of your voice instead of staying just in the middle tones. Great clarity, though!
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September 15, 2021 at 4:29 am #70743
Bil-Bo
ParticipantThe Honey Baked Ham Bees
Bee 1: Hi we’re bees.
Bee 2: And we’re mad!
Bee 1: Here’s the deal. You buy Honey Baked Ham.
Bee 2: You love Honey Baked Ham!
Bee 1: But here’s our beef with this whole Honey Baked Ham thing.
Bee 2: Go ahead, tell ’em!
Bee 1: You talk about the spiral cut
Bee 2: Fine.
Bee 1: You talk about the three generations of traditions.
Bee 2: Also fine.
Bee 1: And you go way nuts over the great honey taste
Bee 2: And that, our human friends, is where the trouble begins.
Bee 1: Yeah, ’cause where did the Honey Baked Ham people get the idea for the great honey taste? HUH?
Bee 2: Yeah, where? FROM BEES! You MORONS!
Bee 1: But have you ever thanked a bee?
Bee 2: Have you ever gone up to a bee and said, “Hey, you bee, thanks for inspiring the great taste of Honey Baked Ham.”
Bee 1: No, you haven’t!
Bee 2: You never thanked us, yet you enjoy Honey Baked Ham on Holidays, at Super Bowl Parties, your kids graduation, birthdays…
Bee 1: Whatever!!! You love it. You enjoy it. But you never thank us.
Bee 2: And YOU wonder why… we STING!
ANNCR: Honey Baked Ham…. The Number One Ham in America!Attachments:
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September 17, 2021 at 3:03 am #70794
Shmuel
ParticipantAs usual, Bil, your reads are a lot of fun.
Wondering how you recorded it – did you do it switching back and forth between characters, or one Bee and then the next, and stitched the two reads together.
Often, your music overwhelms the read, but this time, it was perfect. I heard the music, felt the music, but your reads were dominant. Great.
Bee 2 is mad, but I didn’t quite hear the anger, I would up the anger just a little bit. This is a comedy duo, and you need a straight man and a comedy man, or a light and heavy character. Bee 2 is the heavy. Of course, not too much, as this is a cartoon.
“And that, our human friends, is where the trouble begins” – sorry, but this sounds like an AI read. There were kind of glottal stops between the words, or something. It wasn’t smooth
“No, you haven’t” was an ah-shucks read. I would experiment with doing different versions, like pedandic, laconic, a tad angry (but not like Bee 2), etc.
Wish you success,
Shmuel
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September 15, 2021 at 2:38 am #70738
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September 15, 2021 at 2:42 am #70739
Shmuel
ParticipantHello Beautiful People,
Attached is a sample I recorded in my new space. Your feedback is requested on all aspects, but especially on the technical sound aspect. As they say, two ears are better than one.
The don’t say that ?
Well, they should.
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September 15, 2021 at 12:03 am #70732
Nailah
ParticipantHello guys!!
Any feedback will be appreciated!! Thank you in advance!
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September 16, 2021 at 2:44 pm #70776
Troy C
ParticipantHi Nailah!
First of all, you have a fantastic voice, it’s really unique! You did a great job on every read.
I’ll tell you what I keep getting told, and that’s to slow down the pacing a bit and let your scripts (and yourself) breathe. Especially the Discovery channel one- give a few beats for the listener to process the questions you’re asking. And for like the end of the Spa read, just slow down a bit with the end. You’re telling the listener to relax, so relax your voice a tad more. As for the Trendi read, I genuinely got nothing, that one was really good.
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September 14, 2021 at 12:22 pm #70723
spiceagent11
Participantwhat is your PhotoFiltre version ?
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September 13, 2021 at 12:44 pm #70706
Evette75
ParticipantHi group, adding a few new reads – appreciate your feedback.
People Everyday Podcast
A new podcast covering the most talked – about entertainment news of the day, plus exclusive interviews, features and inspiring stories about real people.
The Podcast for People in the Know. Listen on the Iheart radio app.Tazo Classic Chai Latte
Our delicious, make-at-home chai latte mix features the boldest black teas blended with cinnamon, cardamom, g****r, and black pepper. Just add whatever milk you’re into right now, stir, and indulge on your stoop. Or bed. Whichever one’s closer. Channel Your Inner Barista…Attachments:
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September 16, 2021 at 6:29 pm #70785
John Trape
ParticipantHi Evette,
Thoroughly enjoyed listening to your three reads. Agree with DLeeVO’s feedback and found your voice engaging and sincere. No suggestion for me of a script being read. Rather, I felt that you were talking from the heart to the listener or viewer. And I, too, liked Tazo (take 2) in particular.
Regards,
John
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September 14, 2021 at 6:43 pm #70727
DLeeVO
ParticipantHi Yvette. Yours is such a sweet, delicate voice. I have to turn up my headphones to hear you; is that just my set up?? I’ll say maybe check the length of pause between day, plus in People. And, maybe give Tazo (i like take 2) a bit more umph/yum. nice work!
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