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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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October 9, 2021 at 11:45 am #71252
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October 8, 2021 at 3:22 pm #71246
radioguy
ParticipantHi, I’m Gene Manning – new to the forum and happy to hear from you. Thanks for your input.
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October 9, 2021 at 1:56 pm #71257
Sylvanie
ParticipantHi Gene, You have a great tone! Your pace just a tad bit fast. Slow down a little, but overall nice job! Good luck with it all.
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October 11, 2021 at 1:23 pm #71290
radioguy
ParticipantI fixed the errant files and append them here. Gene
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October 11, 2021 at 1:26 pm #71295
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October 9, 2021 at 9:27 pm #71263
radioguy
ParticipantThanks Sylvanie. The speed is due to many years of live radio announcing.I’m working on it to become a better VO guy.
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October 8, 2021 at 12:37 pm #71242
maxspitz
ParticipantHey Y’all!
My name is Max, I’m new here to the forum and relatively new to the world of VO. I pulled some copy from the script library and would love and really appreciate some feedback/constructive criticism if anyone has a minute.
Thanks!
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October 11, 2021 at 8:25 pm #71301
radioguy
ParticipantYour Almond Breeze delivery was much more smooth. Good job. Keep working with your coach for more tips.
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October 11, 2021 at 8:23 pm #71300
radioguy
ParticipantHi Max. Great voice and decent delivery but you are parsing (pausing where there is no punctuation). Not a terribly bad thing but it interferes with the smooth delivery of the copy. Keep up the good work.
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October 8, 2021 at 10:40 am #71238
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October 11, 2021 at 12:03 pm #71288
nettipo1
ParticipantHi Touzet,
I liked this spot, although I would have liked to hear it without the music. The music enhanced the humorous announcer tone that I think you’ve chosen to do–which I think is a good choice. I think your technique is spot on. It’s always great to listen to your postings. Great job again!
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October 7, 2021 at 4:28 pm #71224
sarahlukens1
ParticipantJust a newbie working on her voiceover stuff.
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October 11, 2021 at 11:51 am #71287
nettipo1
ParticipantHi Sarah, I like the energy of your voice! I think if you eliminate the pauses after “waffles” and “takes” and “home,” it will be smoother. Be mindful of the up inflection on “waffles”, which tends to make it sound more like a question. Nice job.
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October 6, 2021 at 11:28 pm #71211
mkell755
ParticipantHi all! I’m looking for some feedback for my upcoming narration demo. I was going for a friend teaching a friend knitting vibe here. Let me know what you think. Thanks! Mary
The important thing to remember is that every knitter is different, and what works well for one might not suit another. There are also many styles of knitting, with different ways of holding the needles and working with the yarn to create knitted fabric. We’ll show you the most commonly used methods, but you should do whatever feels most natural for you. Just experiment until you find a comfortable way of performing each technique, and don’t worry if your preferred way is slightly different from ours, as long as the result is the same.
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October 7, 2021 at 1:41 pm #71221
JustJohn
ParticipantThis is very good. I sometimes feel like your careful pronunciation causes the read to feel just a little less natural. The phrase “…with different ways of holding the needles and working with the yarn to create knitted fabric” sounds a little breathless or nervous to me. I wonder if a little more pitch variation and maybe slowing down a little at that point would make it flow a little more freely. Overall, though, it sounds friendly and comfortable.
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October 11, 2021 at 8:29 pm #71302
radioguy
ParticipantVery good overall but I think you could make it more natural sounding and less like a lesson. Keep up the good work.
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October 7, 2021 at 11:45 pm #71229
mkell755
ParticipantHi John, thanks for the feedback! I will work on keeping the breaths natural sounding and slowing it a little to be more conversational. Thanks for taking the time to listen!
Mary
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October 6, 2021 at 5:55 pm #71203
LSlagle519
ParticipantI wanted to try my voice at a few commercials in the script library: One for Advil and one for Honey Bunches of Oats. I believe I took the right steps to make the reads conversational, but I would be grateful if I could get some feedback. These were the first recorded takes of each copy since I also want to try to worry less about getting the “right take” and more about getting a believable take.
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October 6, 2021 at 11:36 pm #71213
mkell755
ParticipantHi LSlagle, good job for both scripts! Of the 2 scripts I felt that Advil was more believable and conversational for you, just seemed to flow better. The cereal ad had good inflection and enthusiasm, and there was a nice difference in tone between the two. Keep it up!
Mary
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October 6, 2021 at 7:39 am #71191
Evette75
ParticipantHi Community,
As I try to gauge my direction in the voiceover biz, attempted an audio read… please provide feedback.Excerpt from To K**l A Mockingbird
Chapter 1, paragraph 1
When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow. When it healed, and Jem’s fears of never being able to play football were assuaged, he was seldom self-conscious about his injury. His left arm was somewhat shorter than his right; when he stood or walked, the back of his hand wsa at right angles to his body, his thumb parallel to his thigh. He couldn’t have cared less, so long as he could pass and punt.Attachments:
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October 6, 2021 at 11:41 pm #71214
mkell755
ParticipantHi Evette, very nice! I like your nice soft tone, it’s very pleasant for an audio book. The pacing was good and I could really visualize the images. The only thing I noticed was that “stood” sounded a little smushed, like “sood” (no ‘t’ sound). but that’s minor and can easily be fixed. Good job!
Mary
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October 5, 2021 at 5:12 pm #71181
brucem
ParticipantHi,
I attached a demo script reading; any and all feedback welcomedBruce
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October 15, 2021 at 10:02 pm #71397
Sylvanie
ParticipantHi Bruce, Enjoyable read indeed. Nice deep voice and pace was great. Nice job!
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October 6, 2021 at 11:45 pm #71215
mkell755
ParticipantHi Bruce, good job! Your voice is well-suited for this genre. You have a nice deep and clear voice that cuts through and works well in a college tour like this where you are trying to get and keep college kids’ attention. Nice work!
Mary
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October 6, 2021 at 7:43 am #71193
Evette75
ParticipantHi Steve,
You have a baritone type voice and I enjoyed your read. It was descriptive and to the point. I did detect a little stumble but recovered well. Nice job!
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October 5, 2021 at 10:37 am #71169
jwreickel
ParticipantHey all!
Uploading a few more scripts as part of my homework! Any feedback would be appreciated!
Jimmy
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October 5, 2021 at 1:06 pm #71174
nettipo1
ParticipantHi Jimmy, this is a nice and pleasant-sounding read. I could kind of hear an up-down inflection pattern throughout, so maybe be more selective with the words you choose to emphasize. You have good personality throughout, but perhaps it could be a little more conversational. All in all, you’re going in a good direction. Nice job!
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