[David Goldberg]

The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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[SteveVO]

One more for this evening – an intro into a story about Hemingway. Thanks for any feedback.

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[Mark.OD]

The Gomorrah piece VO is very effective. Pace and tone were perfect. The music overpowered the spot somewhat. Effective pacing on the hockey spots, especially the first one, but again I thought the background was a bit overpowering/ distracting. Nice variation in VO between the two pieces.

[SteveVO]

If you’ve ever wondered how to play what’s called a “flam” in drumming, take a listen to this script. Let me know what you think. Thanks,Steve.

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[1stassi]

Hi guys
I hope I’m doing okay. I’m on my 4 session
Here are two recordings I did for homework. Let me know what you think.

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[airbear57]

Hi,

Your reads were really great 🙂

Motel 6: Your comedic timing was impeccable throughout! One potential suggestion I have would be: Lean into/give a little more emphasis on the first’ Motel 6.’ so listeners know and remember who the commercial is for. Other than that, great job!

Pizza Hut:: I really felt your excitement and you kept it throughout the take which I thought was great! That being said, one suggestion I have would be to maybe vary the pace of the read, especially in the middle around “the ultimate 2 for 1” and “the mozzarella poppers pizza,” that way you can speed up again when you tell them to hurry before it’s gone. Also not sure if you were looking for any editing suggestions, but I would remove the deep breath at the beginning, as it was a little distracting. Otherwise, great job!

[1stassi]

Thank you @airbear57
I appreciate the suggestions and will take that into account.

[iSynge]

Hello! I’m uploading these recordings here for feedback before my next coaching session (I actually have another couple I was thinking of recording, but I didn’t have time to do them today)

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[1stassi]

Hi Synge,

I’m really tasting the pineapples on the your Freshii recording!
Your voice is so inviting.

[Esandyii]

Happy Monday and Happy New Year! Attached is Homework for Bruder for this week.
Comments welcome.
Best,
ES

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[tojo44]

Hi all! Posting my homework before my next coaching session.

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[Mike Reddy]

Greetings everyone! This is my first post to the forum and I’ve attached my Narration Script homework from my first coaching session and due by my second. I look forward to any and all feedback from the community.

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[darmaggi]

Greetings,
I’ve uploaded a couple recent promos I recorded and mixed for any feedback anyone would like to supply.
The Gomorrah spot was modeled after a real promo, and I used it for the timing of all my SFX cues.
It may sound a little busy, but viewed with the video the conception is clear, and any confusion disappears.(I sort of buried ‘Wednesday’in the mix)
I’ve got two versions of the same Stanley Cup Game 7 spot with different music beds. I’ve got my preference, but thought I’d see what others thought.

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[darmaggi]

I forgot to mention,I don’t usually record with headphones, but I mix with them, so to assess these in a similar
state, and to appreciate the lower frequencies that won’t come through on normal laptop speakers, I suggest
listening to my files with cans on.

[DillonP]

Hello everyone, just posting a take for practice and would appreciate some feedback. Now that we are entering the new year, I plan to put more into recording as much as possible.

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[Garprocks]

Hi Dillon! The main thing I suggest is that you really focus on diction. “Child” sounds a touch garbled, “20 minutes” sounds like “mints” and “phonics” sounds like “phonx” at 0:14 & 0:22. Also, at the beginning, have a sense of “WOW!” – start YOUR child…in just FOUR WEEKS. Good job!

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