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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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January 30, 2022 at 4:05 pm #74010
SteveVoice2
ParticipantForgot one:
Assassins CreedFor 20 years, after the Assassins defeated the Templars in London, the city enjoyed a certain peace, until the autumn of Terror in 1888.
London is plunged into shadow and fear, by a series of gruesome and unsolvable murders. The Brothels of White Chapel seem warm and safe by
comparison to its streets, where prostitutes are being mutilated and being left on grotesque display for the world to ogle.
Jacob Frye hunts the elusive killer to bring an end to the Terror of Jack the Ripper.Attachments:
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January 30, 2022 at 4:01 pm #74007
SteveVoice2
ParticipantHi Everyone:
Looking for some feedback to my latest homework assignments:Thanks very much
Steve
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January 30, 2022 at 11:01 am #73998
mmyers24
ParticipantHappy Sunday Everyone,
My name is Malissa and I am new to the Edge Feedback Forum. I am not performing on professional set up just yet, however I need feedback on my conversational commercial reads. Thank you all for taking the time to take a listen and comment. I am so excited to see your thoughts. Have an amazing day.Attachments:
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January 29, 2022 at 12:46 pm #73991
Mike Reddy
ParticipantHello everyone,
Hoping to get some feedback on my recordings. Any and all comments, critiques, etc. are greatly appreciated.
Thanks and have a great weekend!
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January 30, 2022 at 11:22 am #74002
mmyers24
ParticipantHi There PMuller, You have such a calming voice. Great job on controlling your breaths between your sentences especially in the Allstate one. The only thing I would say is on What is Spark and Allstate is maybe vision that you are talking to someone you know to help your message connect to your audience a little more. (This is something I too am working on). Loved the energy in your Texicon read, Just make sure that energy flows throughout. Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Have a fantastic Sunday.
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January 27, 2022 at 10:40 pm #73969
Tracy
ParticipantHello all –
Looking for some feedback on the attached recording. Your comments are appreciated. Thanks in advance.
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January 28, 2022 at 12:58 am #73973
Provocaleric
ParticipantHi,
I am new in voice over, but your read sounds clear and concise and the audio sounds like it has a lot of room tone or reverb. Otherwise, I could see hearing your voice on a training videos at a nursing facility. I’m a nurse by trade, I’ve seen my share of videos. Good Luck!
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January 27, 2022 at 1:31 pm #73957
Jenconnelly20
ParticipantHey all!
I’m new here and looking for some feedback 🙂 Please ignore the quality of recording as I’m not to the home studio step yet, I’m at the “how the h**l do I record on my computer” phase! TIA!!Attachments:
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January 30, 2022 at 11:15 am #74001
mmyers24
ParticipantHi Jen, I enjoyed your voice you have such a sweet yet relatable voice. I would just say watch your breaths (I am practicing the same thing, its hard but we will get there) and look to smooth out any choppiness ( I too am working on this). Thank you for sharing. I feel like I am learning so much from everyone on here.
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January 30, 2022 at 6:38 pm #74020
Jenconnelly20
ParticipantThe breath thing! Thanks so much for your feedback 🙂
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January 26, 2022 at 9:12 pm #73940
chloeblackstone
ParticipantHi everyone! Here’s my first post on here, it’s a practice script from the Edge library. I would love any feedback. This was recorded on the voice memo app on my iPhone, so please don’t mind the audio quality! Thanks y’all.
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January 27, 2022 at 2:09 pm #73963
Tracy
ParticipantGood read. I would agree with the previous comment that it is direct and clear and that it could use just a touch more of a smile. It is bright, but maybe imagine that you are speaking one on one with a new employee on her first day at work. I would also avoid “uptalk” as done on the word “factor” because it sometimes has a tendency of making a person sound unsure of their statement. Solid read.
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January 30, 2022 at 1:13 pm #74005
chloeblackstone
ParticipantThat’s very helpful, thanks for the feedback!
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January 27, 2022 at 1:18 pm #73955
Jenconnelly20
ParticipantHello Chloe! Your voice is nice, direct and clear. I would only suggest trying to smile more so that it comes across in your speech. Great job!
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January 30, 2022 at 1:14 pm #74006
chloeblackstone
ParticipantGot it! I agree, thanks so much!
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January 26, 2022 at 5:33 pm #73931
Erik B
ParticipantHello everybody. I worked on this read, and I was hoping to get some feedback on the performance and recording quality. Thank you.
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January 26, 2022 at 8:20 pm #73936
chloeblackstone
ParticipantHi Erik! I liked the sound of this read. I would recommend on your next read, picture someone in your head that you’re speaking directly to. I think that will help the copy come to life a little more, so to speak. Overall it sounds clean and professional!
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January 26, 2022 at 1:32 pm #73918
Andres
ParticipantJust testing out scripts for my demo, anything and everything you could have to say is very much appreciated!
Welcome to Gordon College! This tour begins just outside the tunnel that goes under College Drive near the flagpole. We will tour East campus first, followed by West Campus, and end the tour back here at the tunnel. Periodically, I will ask you to pause the recording so that you can walk to the next point or take a few minutes to independently tour the area. I will always use the word “pause” when you need to pause the recording. And I will always use the word “stop” when you need to stop walking while I continue speaking. This tour is intended to be listened to while walking around campus and does not include tours of any of the buildings. If you are taking this tour on a day when the buildings are open, please feel free to pause the recording and enter the buildings along the way. As you resume listening to the tour, remember to return to the location where you were last when you pressed pause on the recording.
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January 26, 2022 at 8:33 pm #73938
chloeblackstone
ParticipantHi Andres, I think your voice is a great match for this copy! My recommendation is to slow down a bit, in general. I noticed there were a few series of words that sounded mashed together, and some words that “fell off” at the last syllable. For example “and end the tour back here at the tunnel.” Make sure to enunciate “tunnel.” I think if you take your time and make sure not to rush the copy, these are easy fixes. Overall, nice work!
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January 26, 2022 at 5:21 pm #73929
Erik B
ParticipantHi Andres,
I like your voice, and your tone throughout the read is very good. My only criticisms are the first sentence ends with an exclamation point, and I feel like you can add more energy there. Also I noticed breathes thoughout the read, maybe minimize or mute the breathes. Overall good job.
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January 26, 2022 at 2:27 pm #73920
Provocaleric
ParticipantDear Andres,
I liked your voice, I felt a good positive, friendly, helpful and clear sound! If I had to make any criticisms it would be to try upward inflecting more on the ends of your sentences to add vocal variety.
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January 25, 2022 at 7:40 pm #73891
raymazebarnes
ParticipantGood evening,
This is my first time posting to the forum. Looking for critiques on my two reads attached for my enunciation and pacing. Thank you in advance.
Raymaze Barnes
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January 27, 2022 at 1:22 pm #73956
Jenconnelly20
ParticipantYou have a beautiful strong and clear voice. I would suggest maybe looking at punctuation and where to take breaths to carry a full sentence and idea (I’m working on this too 🙂 Good work!
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February 7, 2022 at 6:30 pm #74205
raymazebarnes
ParticipantThank you Jen and yes I will work on the breaths and punctuation
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