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Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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Good evening,
This is my first time posting to the forum. Looking for critiques on my two reads attached for my enunciation and pacing. Thank you in advance.
Raymaze Barnes
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You have a beautiful strong and clear voice. I would suggest maybe looking at punctuation and where to take breaths to carry a full sentence and idea (I’m working on this too 🙂 Good work!
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You have a clear, young and authoritative sound. I agree with some of the other postings that some of this stuff can seem dry. If I had to criticize anything it would be to give more brightness to your tone and imagine teaching a subject one on one with a student. Otherwise, I liked it!
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Really good reads! In each of them you have genuinely smooth even pacing. You speak clearly and it’s easy to understand what you’re saying. I would maybe suggest giving a little more energy to keep your audience interested, informational pieces can sometimes come across as a little dry.
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Hello all! I am brand new to this forum. I started with Edge webinars this month and just had my first coaching session with James Andrews (great!). I have invested time in crafting my home studio space and welcome any feedback about the recording quality in addition to the read. Thank you for your time and consideration! Here is the copy:
Nature’s Recyclers – Discovery Kids (sourced from the Edge Script library)
Did you know that mold and bacteria and higher level organisms like beetles, centipedes and, of course, earthworms are all busy recyclers? By breaking down organic matter – stuff like dead plants, p**p, and decaying animals – they create valuable nutrients necessary for rich and fertile soil. Take it from me, a worm who know, we are doing you a big favor.
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This was a fun read. You maintained good energy throughout which is especially important in a children’s reading. On my end the P in p**p came across slightly hard-sounding. There were also some audible breaths at the very beginning and a few times throughout including right before “take it from me.” Could just be an equipment issue but overall a fun listen.
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Good Day,
I would appreciate your feedback on my final narration training assignment. I have been working on eliminating glottal noise. Any other suggestions on improving are also welcome. Thank you!
Scripts:
Relaxation:
To begin, make yourself comfortable, it’s best to lie on your back. Put your arms by your sides not touching your body. Put your feet slightly apart. With each exhalation let all the tension out of your body. Let the tension just dissolve and flow out.
American Airlines:
Welcome aboard American Airlines coast-to-coast service. We’ll be happy to do everything possible to make your flight with us a most pleasurable experience. We’ll provide you with all the information you need to know about your flight, your destination, and the equipment on which you are currently flying. In addition, we are proud to present our American Airlines feature film presentation, for our transcontinental passengers. We’d like you now to remove the plastic insert found directly in front of you in the seat back pocket. Please review the safety information during the flight for your own protection, in the unlikely event of an in-flight emergency.
Real Estate:
Would you like to buy a house?
Maybe it’s your first house, or even your second and you just think that MAYBE you didn’t think hard enough about the last one.
Listen, I love real estate. And in most cases, even a bad deal can work to your advantage in the very long run. But there are dumb things that people do without realizing it when they buy a house.
Humor me for a short story before we get into the meat of this video.-
Bevy,
You have a pleasant, friendly sound! Your recording sounded a bit loud, perhaps the gain or compression was a bit hot, but I especially liked your American Airlines read -
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Hey Dillon,
I loved your enthusiasm on the Dominos ad and the political spot, your voice sounds wellsuited for these spots, however I’m hearing too much room reflection and clicks in your mic. Izotopes Voice denoiser is awesome! -
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Hello everyone! I’d much appreciate a critique of this audition for performance and audio quality. No slate was requested and I thought this one take covered everything my gut told me to go with. I haven’t been practicing as much as I should so be honest – it’ll light a fire under my b**t. Thanks!
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Hi, everyone ~
First time poster, but I would love to have some feedback on my two reads below. Thank you in advance. 🙂
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REPOST WITH SCRIPTS:
BOYS & GIRLS CLUB
PUT THIS CARD IN THE HANDS OF A CHILD AND THERE’LL BE NO ROOM FOR A GUN. A NEEDLE. OR A KNIFE. IT’S ONLY A PIECE OF PAPER, BUT THAT LITTLE MEMBERSHIP CARD HAS HELPED KEEP MILLIONS OF KIDS OFF DRUGS, OUT OF GANGS AND IN SCHOOL. TO LEARN HOW YOU CAN HELP THE BOYS & GIRLS CLUBS, CALL 1-800-854-CLUB. BOYS & GIRLS CLUBS OF AMERICA. THE POSITIVE PLACE FOR KIDS.
GEICO
THESE DAYS, IT SEEMS AS IF EVERY CAR INSURANCE COMPANY NEEDS A SYMBOL. THINGS LIKE A BLANKET OR A HAND. WELL, IF GEICO HAD A SYMBOL, IT WOULD SURELY BE THE FRONTAL LOBE OF THE CEREBRAL CORTEX. YOU SEE…IT’S HERE, DEEP WITHIN THE BRAIN, THAT NERVE IMPULSES FIGURE OUT, “HEY…IT’S SMARTER TO BUY CAR INSURANCE FROM GEICO.” OVER 10,000 DRIVERS SWITCH EACH WEEK! SO CALL FOR A FREE RATE QUOTE TODAY. YEP, THE BRAIN’S A GREAT SYMBOL. WE JUST CAN’T IMAGINE THE MEDULLA OBLONGATA ON OUR STATIONARY. CALL 1-800-4-GEICO. GEICO DIRECT, THE SENSIBLE ALTERNATIVE. NOT AVAILABLE IN
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Hi Carynbell, really fun reads- I like your voice and I believe you have talent! I’d suggest working a little on mic technique- try backing away from the mic just an inch or two and speaking off-axis a little bit and see how that sounds. That should help reduce some of the distortion and plosives. The only other thing that stands out is around halfway through your Geico read the recoding seems to get louder, like it’s a part where you cut two different takes together. Again though, really good reads!
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