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[David Goldberg]

The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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[Earthbul]

Been a while since I’ve posted. Looking forward to hearing some of the newer folks.
Any thoughts are welcomed and appreciated.

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[RoxyMel]

Very nice. Smooth. I like where you put your intonations and the texture of you voice matched well.

[ilene.echavarria]

Hello Edge Friends!

Could you pls. take a listen and provide honest feedback on my 3 commercial reads attached? Appreciate it and thank YOU!

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[airbear57]

Hi everyone, I would really appreciate it if you would give my practice commercial scripts a listen and provide any feedback!

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Thanks so much,
Arin

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[ilene.echavarria]

Hi Arin! These are lovely and clear reads. On “Home Chef,” try a take a bit more playful and fun. Feel like you played it safe on this one. I think “Scribd” was golden. I can hear this playing on digital radio like Spotify or Pandora. Great job!

[iSynge]

Hello everyone! Got a few recordings I was hoping to get some feedback on before my next coaching session. I’d appreciate the help!

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[Provocaleric]

Dear Forum,

Please let me know what you think about this medical read, thank you all very much!

Phytophotodermatitis is a nonimmunologic phototoxic cutaneous eruption resulting from contact with photosensitizing substances found in plants; furocoumarins (present in limes and other plants) are typically implicated and get activated following exposure to sunlight, especially 320-400 nanometer UVA rays.

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[Provocaleric]

Dear Mir,

You have a clear, sweet tone with good diction. I would only criticize your pacing should pick up and add more flow, plus I think you miss pronounced Marauders. I appreciate you and wish you all the best, keep getting better and take care!

[Provocaleric]

Thank you Chloe, I appreciate it

[mir19800]

Hello Everyone,
I uploaded this file and would love your feedback. Your words of wisdom and suggestions will be greatly appreciated. Thanking you in advance.

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[Provocaleric]

Hello fellow friendly voice pals!

I was hoping to borrow your professional ears for a comment or two about this medical read genre I am considering for my demo. I picked a relatively easy word difficulty read to start with. Here is the script.
Blood Glucose Meters

f you have diabetes, using a blood glucose meter is very important. It helps you keep your blood sugar within a healthy range. They don’t all look like this one, but they all pretty much work the same way. You provide a drop of blood, and the meter tells you what your glucose level is. Don’t get freaked out, it’s just a little pinch, and using the meter is really easy. The first thing to do is to load a test s***p into the meter. That’s a little piece of paper that reacts with your blood.

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[chloeblackstone]

Hi Provocaleric! Your voice is very smooth, clear, and professional! Since this read is all about Blood Glucose Meters, I would make sure to emphasize the words “blood glucose meter” in the first sentence. My other recommendation is to picture someone you are speaking to throughout the copy. Great job, overall. keep it up!

[Provocaleric]

Dear Chloe,
You have a friendly, clear and pleasant tone! If I had to criticize, I would say maybe you could have a bit more contrast with your tone on keywords and phrasing and maybe just a wee bit faster of a read overall, otherwise your awesome! Please feel free to read my for critique as well, thank you and I wish nothing but the best for you!

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