[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Earthbul]

Thought I’d take another shot at it.
I re-recorded the Broadbridge script and changed the music bed.
All comments welcomed.

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[Earthbul]

Rogers
He gave us the most precious gift of all: the courage to be kind.
Won’t You Be My Neighbor ? reflects on Fred Rogers legacy of kindness,
and the profound and lasting effect his innovative approach to television had on millions of children.

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[manchilda]

Well, this certainly sounds like you’ve been doing this for a long time. Incredibly professional and smooth!

[Nik]

This is brilliant!!!

[Nicholson71vo]

I like this…very smooth and easy. Nice work

[Provocaleric]

To Earthbul,

Beautiful job! I admire your choices during that read, your clear tone and pacing was great, the only thing I could say to criticize you on anything would be to add a little smoother transition from phrase to phrase, less sing songy, but really quite amazing. nice work

[Earthbul]

Thanks Provo. Sing Song delivery is something I struggle with. Thanks for the feedback.

[Earthbul]

Same as previous admission but with an added soundbed.

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[Earthbul]

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Now imagine the next ten.
What comes after Basel IV ?
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Broadridge
Ready for next

All comments appreciated

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[Provocaleric]

I thought your read was very professional and sounded good, but my rookie ears think you should pick up the tempo some just to give it a little more umph! Nice job..:)

[ksheneman]

Kathryn Sheneman’s first submission for feedback. Have at it. Thank you. (Pumas2pbs.mp3)

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[RoxyMel]

I enjoy your pronunciation. Just seems to me if you give slightly shorter pauses on comas and slightly longer for ends of sentences it might be even easier for the listener to follow along. I love this interesting topic your speaking about.

[Blandus]

Hello Friends!

This is my first attempt at recording VO scripts. I am recording a couple of scripts from the edge studio library as homework before my next coaching session. Any feedback you may have would be most appreciated! Thanks a bunch!

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[Earthbul]

Truck spots are not your friend. Don’t misunderstand, I like your voice but I think you should focus on calmer/humorous reads. I feel your voice lends itself towards it. Btw I couldn’t access the other file for some reason.

[Provocaleric]

Dear Forum,

I look forward to your feedback, thank you!

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[Provocaleric]

Dear Isynge,

I applaud you putting yourself up for review, that can a big step. I want to start by saying your voice is clear and your pronunciations are great! If I had to critique your reads I would say you need to connect more with what your reading and do less reading if you know what I mean and add a little more musicality to your phrasing plus know where to hit your key words, we have to sell this stuff. Great job overall and I wish you the best!

[Author]

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