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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #74810
    Courtney Feiman
    Participant

    Hello hello!

    I tried posting this earlier, but I don’t think it went through. If there are multiple posts, I apologize. A little homework practice. Thank you for your feedback!

    Burt’s Bees:
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    Aruba Travel:
    It is always summer in Aruba. If you are looking for a tropical paradise offering everything from quiet romantic activities to exciting adventures for the whole family, you have found it. Come spend a few days or a few weeks, you’ll be glad you did. If you love the tropics you will love what Aruba offers.

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    • #74816
      Earthbul
      Participant

      Love, love, love your voice. You’ve got a slight gravel in the throat that’s similar to something I have.

  • #74805
    bnielsen15
    Participant

    Hi everyone! I’m returning after an unexpected break in my sessions, but I’m so ready to get back into it. This is my homework for my third session. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

    Staples:
    Is work really good? Because it kind of looks bad. Good doesn’t make you check your personality at the door. Good wants you to bring it to work. Good is hustling hard. Not because you have to, but because you’re happy to. Start living the good work life. Staples.

    Movie Gallery:
    Have you ever noticed what happens when you put in a movie? It’s amazing. You just stick it in, sit back, hit play, and… gone. The rest of the world just disappears… At Movie Gallery, we have thousands of great movies. And every one of them is guaranteed to have that same magical power.

    Waterpik:
    If you floss you know what a two-handed tug of war feels like. Which is why we at Waterpik are introducing the Flosser. At a speed of 10,000 gentle strokes per minute, its nylon tip effectively removes plaque above and below the gumline. Making it a fast, easy and more convenient way to keep gums their healthiest, and teeth their cleanest. With no strings attached.

    Thank you so much in advance!

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    • #74815
      Courtney Feiman
      Participant

      These are really lovely reads. Strong pacing and a nice natural sound. I’d say for the Movie Gallery and Waterpik ones give the end more of an ending. It sounded a little open ended. Like there was more going to be said.

  • #74802
    Earthbul
    Participant

    Any critiques are welcomed and appreciated

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    • #74828
      Courtney Feiman
      Participant

      Wow! Chills. Love the gravel sound to your voice. Gives such a natural intensity to the words.

  • #74800
    RoxyMel
    Participant

    Feedback is much appreciated. Thank you so much

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    • #74912
      ilene.echavarria
      Participant

      Hi RoxyMel! This was so beautiful. You have a nice, soothing quality to your voice. My comment on this read would be to make sure you’re not chopping some of your sentences. This is specifically at 00:13 “and a picture of… a cow jumping over…” I would suggest reading it together so it flows better 😉 Other than that, I think this was pretty sweet!

  • #74780
    Mike Reddy
    Participant

    Hello everyone,

    Any and all feedback is welcome.

    Thanks!!!

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    • #74788
      manchilda
      Participant

      Nice work on “Meet Bob,” that is a tough script. I took a crack at it after hearing you, and I admire your enunciation.

  • #74777
    Esandyii
    Participant

    Homework Bruder 2.28.2022.
    Comments Welcome

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    • #74789
      manchilda
      Participant

      I listened to both the Atlanta Bread Company and Advil. Loved how welcoming you are for ABC! And I’ve never felt more positive about something making me feel better than your Advil read, you have an uplifting, friendly tone.

  • #74774
    Earthbul
    Participant

    Does anyone here use Source Connect Standard ? Most of the auditions my agent sends call for it. I’m going to get it this month but I’d love to do a practice session with someone just to get acclimated to it. Thanks

  • #74770
    RoxyMel
    Participant

    Hi, I appreciate any feedback, thank you!

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    • #74772
      Earthbul
      Participant

      What type of mic are you working with ?

      • #74773
        RoxyMel
        Participant

        Just my phone app, why?
        Thank you

        • #74785
          Earthbul
          Participant

          Just wondering. I like your voice. A proper mic will really showcase it.

        • #74798
          RoxyMel
          Participant

          Oh thank you so much. I will definitely look into that for the future. Thanks for the feedback.

  • #74766
    RoxyMel
    Participant

    Love to hear feed back, thank you!

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  • #74763
    Nik
    Participant

    Hi there, any feedback on this would be appreciated!

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    • #74818
      Earthbul
      Participant

      Nice delivery. You’ve got a smooth sound.

    • #74790
      manchilda
      Participant

      WOW! I don’t even drink this, and now I’m going to buy a bottle. Great Read!

      • #74824
        Nik
        Participant

        lol thank you 🙂

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