[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Earthbul]

Re-uploading the Dog Breath script w/ a music bed. How does the mix sound to you ? Is the music too loud ?

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[Earthbul]

This is the story of a small planet in space called Earth.
Today it has mighty oceans; scorched deserts; and frozen wildernesses.
It supports a multitude of diverse creatures, and is home to more than 6 billion people and their technological civilization.

But how did all this come about? Where do we come from?

Until recently, Earth and its lifeforms were a mystery. Like a huge unpainted canvas, little was known about the origin of Earth and its inhabitants.
But today, we have a rough idea of what happened.
It began – with a bang

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[Earthbul]

Aetna/US Healtcare
No matter where we live- when it comes to something
as important as healthcare- we all want the best.
That’s why Aetna and US Healthcare have joined forces
to create a partnership that will set a new standard
for quality and caring. Aetna and US Healthcare.
Raising a standard for your town, for your family,
and for you.
The wife alerted me to the fact that the music in the
version below might be a tad too loud. This one might be better.
Thoughts ?
All comments and critiques are appreciated.

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[Earthbul]

Aetna/US Healtcare
No matter where we live- when it comes to something
as important as healthcare- we all want the best.
That’s why Aetna and US Healthcare have joined forces
to create a partnership that will set a new standard
for quality and caring. Aetna and US Healthcare.
Raising a standard for your town, for your family,
and for you.
Still tinkering with my sound levels.
All comments and critiques are appreciated.

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[Provocaleric]

Dear my favorite Edge friends,

We are gathered here today to listen to this promo! It is from the brilliant archive library of Edge Studio. I would appreciate everyone’s honest brutal feedback, go for it!

NO
Kids hate the word no. As in no you can’t stay up late, no you can’t have more ice cream and no, you may not paint the cat. No, no, NO! Well isn’t it time for a yes? We think so. Six Flags Great Adventure. Yes!

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[Earthbul]

Very animated. I really enjoyed it. I’d love to hear your interpretation of the Dog Breath spot I posted. Keep it up 🙂

[ilene.echavarria]

Hi Eric! I love your choices here. Great energy, clear diction, good pauses that allows for the punchline to land. Great job!

[Provocaleric]

Hi Roxy,
You have a nice and sweet voice, I would maybe hire you for an e-learning or kids book for sure! If I had to critique you, I would say to emphasize plastic at the end a little more and give your read a little more musicality, otherwise I liked it! Keep going for it!

[Provocaleric]

Sorry I had a hard time listening to your read because your audio sounded hollow and tinny. But if I had to say anything I would say your a very down to earth guy and your choices you took during the read were good, after hearing the read I personally would consider going to this store to try on some shoes, good luck

[manchilda]

thanks! proper equipment is on the way, but I had homework from my coach in advance of my next session with her, thus the assault on your eardrums.

[manchilda]

I promise to group these next time…yikes!

Again, feedback is appreciated!

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[manchilda]

This read was pretty fun as well. Again, sorry for the bad airpod audio. 😬 All feedback is appreciated!

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[manchilda]

I liked this script…BASF Better – At BASF, we don’t make the cooler, we make it cooler. We don’t make the jeans, we make them bluer. We don’t make the toys, we make them tougher. At BASF, we don’t make a lot of the products you buy. We make a lot of the products you buy better. BASF.

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