[David Goldberg]

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[Earthbul]

Any and all comments welcomed and appreciated

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[manchilda]

Great read, but the music bed overpowered it in spots, and I noticed that more than what you were saying. I had to listen to this one, my dad worked for ConEd for 30 years!

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Bass Pro Shops – “Shared Memories”

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[RBenesVO]

Couple different voices. I intent to edit and/or leave alone based on feedback; AEC is more my normal, Cactus is my deeper. Thanks for the time!

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[manchilda]

I love the experimentation! The AEC read sounded more natural for you, it seemed to me, I’d be interested in a slightly faster pace on that one.

[RBenesVO]

Much appreciated!

[ilene.echavarria]

Hey guys, me again!

Could you pls. take a listen and provide honest feedback on my 3 commercial reads attached? Appreciate it and thank YOU for your input and time! I did 2 reads for the first 2 😉

Blue from American Express:

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Blue from American Express.

LEGO:

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We DON’T.
Because, HERE’S the TRUTH…
Girls HAVE ALWAYS BEEN ready.NOW it’s time for the world TO GET READY for THEM.
GET the world READY for GIRLS.
LEGO.

Alzheimer’s:

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Memory loss … Asking repeated questions … Trouble using words.
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They may be signs of Alzheimer’s disease, an incurable, progressive illness that robs patients AND their families of a lifetime of memories.
Only a doctor can evaluate symptoms such as forgetfulness and diagnose Alzheimer’s disease.
To learn more, call toll-free today: 1-888-988-9565.

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[chennianen]

I love the way you sound! It’s very warm and cheerful and I can hear the smile in your voice when you read it. I think there could be a bit more pause between certain sentences, as it sounded a little rushed. Especially in the LEGO and Alzheimer’s scripts, some more space between sentences would allow me to absorb the information. But really, I love these readings!

[Logan DFD]

I’d like some feedback on my natural delivery. Thanks!

Earthbound Farm

Here at Earthbound Farm, we don’t use any harmful chemical pesticides.
All of our organic salads, fruits and vegetables are grown in harmony with nature.
And while farming organically may cost more, we think you’ll find Earthbound Farm organic produce is an infinitely better value.
Because with each crisp, delicious bite, you can take comfort in knowing you’re protecting your family’s health.
Now and for years to come.
Earthbound Farm.
Food to live by.

(Click on the second file, the .m4a file. I accidentally put in the Logic Pro X file at first. Sorry.)

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[Nimbbl]

Nimbbl 1 Click checkout solution for a better customer experience. Get the best payment gateway in India, UPI payments, Buy Now Pay Later and more. Visit: https://nimbbl.biz

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[Provocaleric]

Earthbul,

I do not have a website yet, but if you want to connect with me. Maybe look me up on Facebook and we could start there. Eric Heaps. Unless there is another way?

[manchilda]

I liked this script AND my microphone and headset have arrived, no more airpod audio!

I am Anxiety – I’ve been expecting you. Why? Don’t tell me you don’t recognize me? Oh! You still don’t know who I am. Let me try and help you with that. I am the ill ease that you feel when you walk into a crowded room. You know. The hot and cold flushes that confuse you when you are already confused enough. I am the one that raises the whip to your already raising heart. I am the tightening of your chest. The s*********g worries that feel like they might become an avalanche and they can just bury you in an instant. My friend I am the obsessive and the compulsive. I’m the voice. You know the one. Always questioning, questioning, questioning, everything you do, everything you think. And I am every, single staring eye that watches you. So, now that we have become acquainted, what are you going to do about it?
Tag: 1 in 4 people experience anxiety. And most don’t know about it. You need to know anxiety to be free from it.
Visit beyondblue.org.au or call 1300 22 4636.

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[Earthbul]

I liked your delivery on this one. The pace was very natural. Good job.

[manchilda]

thanks so much!

[HeatherDT]

Your voice was made for VO. I wish I had your ability to pace at that rate, but for the seriousness of this, I would love to hear it a little slower. Well done.

[manchilda]

Thank you Heather! I usually go too slow, and I thought that if I sped it up and kept accelerating (which I’m not normally comfortable with), it would actually induce the feeling of anxiety that they were trying to convey.

[Provocaleric]

Thank you for your advice, I am struggling with connecting to an image, I have to focus better. I hope your audition went well.

[Earthbul]

You’re not alone in that. That’s still one of the most difficult aspects for me. Audition went horrible for that very reason lol I feel I came at it way too seriously. You have a website ? I’d love to share it with you and get your thouggts. Legally, I can’t post it on a public forum.

[Bil-Bo]

Justin Boots (Pecos Red)
Hi, I’m Pecos Red for Justin Boots. Ever heard the term: “All Hat and no cattle”? That’s the problem with a lot of boots I know. Sounds weird, but the thing of it is that most boots don’t do the same things your feet do, like expand and contract when you take a step.
Most boots are rigid, which is why your “dawgs commence to barkin’” and get all swole up, from yer boot-heels a wanderin’.
At Justin Boots, our technology is a simple idee that comes
right out of the way your foot works. It’s how we build ever’ boot we make. So’s it expands and flexes the way your foot does when it’s out ridin’ the range, or just boot-scootin’ out at Billy Bob’s. Justin Boots Quality. It’s a DANG good thing! I’m Pecos Red, remindin’ ya: never kick a cow chip on a hot day! Justin Boots. Don’t wear ‘em. Use ‘em!

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[Sylvanie]

This was a fun read! Very cool voice. Awesome job

[Bil-Bo]

Hi Just a character voice. Thanks for listening.

[manchilda]

This was fantastic! I’m with Heather, it’s great if that’s your natural voice, even more impressive if it isn’t.

[HeatherDT]

That was just Wow! I smiled the entire time. No idea if that is your natural accent, but you nailed this. Very well done.

[Ems412]

Hello,

I would like to get some feedback on my three narration reads below for my coaching class homework. THank you in advance.

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[HeatherDT]

I would love to hear a bit more passion in each read. For Wales and the one about New Orleans, maybe a little slower and more punch to some of the words so I can see it all in my mind. The Venus and Serena one, is the same. Slower with pride. Let your tone show how amazing what they achieved was.

[Ems412]

Thank you! My instructor and I agreed you have a great ear!

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