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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #75075
    Earthbul
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    Any and all feedback welcomed and appreciated.

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    • #75147
      RBenesVO
      Participant

      I like that a lot. I imported it into Adobe Audition so I could get a better look at the waveform. I’m curious, did you normalize it? The whole thing reads really well, and at my level can’t offer much in feedback except that the voice, pacing, etc., were all spot on for this.

      • #75230
        Earthbul
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        Thanks. Yeah, I just do noise reduction and than I normalize at 3.0 DB. I use Audacity. Basic I know but it gets the job done. Been playing around with Mix Pad as well.

    • #75091
      Kim_Lomax
      Participant

      Wow! There is so much great stuff happening here! I also love the pacing and the space between phrases. …”the true story of [space] Algona”… so good:). I have one observation and it may not even be a bad thing, but I notice that your ends of phrases tend to finish at approximately the same pitch. There’s great variety in the beginnings and middle sections of your phrases, particularly “and put to work in farms and factories and even in private homes..”

    • #75078
      manchilda
      Participant

      It’s terrific, love the music bed. Pacing, pauses, well enunciated, all great…you have a terrific tone to your voice as well!

  • #75072
    Esandyii
    Participant

    Homework Bruder 3.7.2022

    Comments Welcome

    ES

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    • #75105
      chennianen
      Participant

      Your pacing is really good here, it doesn’t sound like you’re rushing at all and I can hear everything clearly — Macallan one especially. The important words are highlighted, there is plenty of variation in speaking, and my attention was held throughout. Nice work!

  • #75069
    Earthbul
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    Here’s an audition I submitted for a show currently
    running on Netflix. Here’s the character bio for Rand Ridley:
    He is Reagan Ridley’s toxic, dependent and neglectful father, Tamiko Ridley’s ex-husband and the co-founder of Cognito, Inc., a shadow government company keeping the world conspiracies, most of which are true, out of the public eye. While initially appearing as likely a deeply hurt and broken man, in truth he is a manipulative, self-centered, power-hungry, abusive, obnoxious, narcissistic sociopath who cares little about Reagan other than for his own benefits and selfish advantages. At the end of the first season, he becomes the new and current CEO of Cognito Inc. after the previous one, J.R. Scheimpough, was send to a black site prison by the Shadow Board. He is the archenemy of his daughter, Reagan.

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  • #75066
    Earthbul
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    Same as previous but w/ music bed

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  • #75064
    Earthbul
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    Any comments or critiques welcomed.

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    • #75108
      chennianen
      Participant

      I really like the tone you have as well as the energy you bring! I can definitely picture you being on the radio or TV doing an ad. Keep up the amazing work! And the version with music sounds even more engaging, really!

  • #75060
    touzet
    Participant

    ACE Hardware :15tv “What Beats Next-Day Shipping”

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  • #75058
    Earthbul
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    I’m Batman lol
    Can I get any more gravelly ?

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  • #75054
    touzet
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    Tractor Supply Company [TV30]- “A New Day: Summer”

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    • #75057
      Earthbul
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      Pace, energy and diction are on point. Love the music bed as well.

  • #75049
    Earthbul
    Participant

    Here’s a read along of a book titled “Worry Says What ?”
    that I did for my 2nd gr class during our time in lockdown.
    My first attempt at an audiobook.

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  • #75046
    Earthbul
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    Any and all comments or critiques appreciated.

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