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Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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Hello friends! Here are some (long) narration scripts for feedback. Please don’t critique the audio- I am continuing to work on getting that right, but focus more on the read itself, please and thank you!
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Really enjoyed the B****r Creek Audio Tour. Nice friendly delivery, you sounded natural and knowledgeable. Your delivery was clear and pacing was very good.
Depreciation was again natural and knowledgeable. You conveyed some very complex concepts in a understandable tone. There were some very complex concepts and words but you flowed very smoothly. You made it easy to understand. Nice Job.
The Nat Geo – glad you got on the level of the kids in your delivery of the yucks and stuff. Suggestion… Maybe then you can then put on the teacher hat on the deeper parts of the explanation like how the plastic and chemicals stay around forever are not like an a apple. I know that may be clear as mud.
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Lindsay, I liked your pacing on the Nat. Geo upload. Your study.com reading was not easy to do and I can tell you worked h*****n it. It can be challenging to say the same words over and over again, such as “depreciation” and “method.” There were a few times in which you raised your tone with some nasal tones that sometimes stood out when compared to the rest of the recording. Maybe that was your intention. Nice contrast to your uploads and how you presented them.
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Hello all,
First time uploading. Thank you in advance for any feedback you provide and for taking the time to listen!
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Amtrak was great because you really conveyed your own belief that seeing the sights from the train is an amazing way to see the country, and affordable!
Legos read wasn’t bad, but the list read was listless (ha!) as noted by Rusty. There was a part where you say “…Legos, the creative building toy…” where it feels like you’re saying, “legos, you know that QUOTE creative ” building toy?” in a kind of dismissive tone. Like you HAD to say it, but didn’t really believe it.
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Del Monte
My granddad built this farm way back in the late 1800s. He had a policy of producing only the finest quality fruits and vegetables. That’s why people began to know and enjoy the name Del Monte. … Well, today, the farm is mine — and ya’ know, I still carry on the proud tradition of only the finest fruits and vegetables. DEL MONTE — only the finest.-
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Hey Bill great delivery as usual. Makes me believe you really did inherit the “farm” in how you connect with the script!
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Hello Edge Studio Alumni,
I have just started my training program and was asked by my coach to post two readings here for review, as well as to review some readings. I apologize for selecting two scripts from the library as I’m sure some of you may have heard these before. I hope for your honest feedback, as I will give you.
Thank you,
Rusty
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Rusty,
Nice read on script 1 it was very engaging, pace and tone were great! For script 2 it was alittle difficult the hear the client’s name. -
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Hello Edge Studio Alumni,
I’ve just started coaching and as homework was asked to create and post two readings. I took scripts from the Script Library, I apologize if you’ve heard these a dozen or more times already, but would you please give me your honest feedback on them? I would appreciate that greatly!
I look forward to hearing from you.
Rusty Jones
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Hello everyone,
I have two pieces to share. Let me know if they sound conversational or if the tempo is too fast. Thank you.
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I love the fun and friendly tone of your voice. You sounded very conversational and inviting in the Motel 6 read, and I really believed that you would “leave the light on” for me. The Milk read also sounded conversational, but I would have liked to hear just a little more enthusiasm. I want to really be able to hear your voice convey that it’s the “energizer you can’t do without.” Also, try not to let some of your words run together. For example, “Need to” and “out of” sounded more like needtuh and outta. I have to watch myself with this too : )
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Hi, I was just listening to your Motel-6 read. There were a couple of words that sounded run together. Just after you say “Well, Motel 6…” I think you said something about just got a redo to, but it’s kind of run together. I think for Motel-6 it is a bit fast. If you listen to their commercials, they are slow, relaxed, and inviting. I’m very new at this so I could be way off. Just my thoughts.
Rusty
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Hey guys, I’ve got a couple of recordings here that I would like feedback on before my next coaching session.
Thanks for the help!
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Hi, I listened to your Church’s Chicken read. You had some trouble with the word probably the second time you said it. Other than that it sounded pretty high energy, right until the very end where it dropped off a bit. I’m really new at this and don’t know what’s expected here, so I’m just putting down what I hear. I hope y’all will do the same for me.
Rusty
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Hi iSynge,
I liked both recordings. Churches Chicken is fun copy! I would say for that show more that you know something they don’t know and it is really great. For Butterball, bring more excitement for something that brings out the joys of a holiday, maybe Thanksgiving is your favorite holiday and you love stuff that reminds you of it.
Hope this helps!
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Hi Everyone, I would like feedback on some narration reads. I appreciate any notes or tips that you can offer. I’m mostly hoping for feedback on the read itself rather than technical feedback. Thank you in advance.
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