[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[nicolance]

Dear Everyone – Corporate human resources explainer video – my goal was to sound like the experienced mentor sitting next to you having a friendly conversation. What do you think? Thanks! Lance

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[Gill]

This is a great read Lance. Your tone and pace makes the read flow nicely. I would say towards the end where you have a list of things to just add some more variations as you hit each of them. Also, when you said training and educational opportunities it sounded combined so try them separately and see how different that sounds.

[Elise Duke]

Hi everyone! I would really appreciate your feedback on these samples. If you could please provide feedback on any/all of these items, that would be very helpful: my overall tone, cadence, pronunciations, pace and if my readings sound conversational or not. Thank you!!

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[JoyceVOA]

JIF – Overall good read. I could hear the emotion in the beginning. Then it became a little choppy. Your pace was good.

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[Elise Duke]

Thank you Joyce!!

[Carita]

Hi Eduke54 I like the NY Times read the best . It had a lot of great energy! Keep up the good work.

[HeatherDT]

Good Evening Everyone! Hope you all had a good holiday weekend.
Please forgive that this is a bit lengthy, but it comprises of the clips that I will likely use for my demo reel. Nothing is final. My focus is narration.
I am struggling a bit still to find enough range in my voice and still sound like myself. I look forward to any feedback provided.
Many thanks,
Heather

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[Carita]

Hello Everyone! Looking for feedback and tips on these two pieces. Thank you. Carita

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[JoyceVOA]

Carita you scared me! Your voice sounds so much like mine. Wow! I listened to JOY. I thought your pace and tone were excellent. I heard your emotion in the beginning. It sounded like you were smiling. Then you voice sounded more technical. You ended with a smile. Good job!

[Unity]

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[SuperLuke]

It was a good performance. Sounded echoey in the background though.

[Unity]

Hello. As a Voice Over novice I’m posting to receive feedback on the attached samples. your time and feedback is most appreciated.

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[iSynge]

Hey all! This is my first set of recordings after getting my new voice booth set up, so I’m eager for feedback on how things sound. From my point of view, they sound a lot better, but I would appreciate an outside perspective.

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[SuperLuke]

Very good performance. Practice pacing, in case a client tells you to speed up the commercial read(s).

[mmyers24]

Good Morning Everyone. This is so exciting. I am fairly new to the forum and would love to receive some feedback on my recordings from my fellow peers, Your opinions mean a lot to me and will not be taken in vain. I chose two different spots. One soft and the other more upbeat. Thank you so much in advance.

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[mir19800]

Good reads on both. You sound as if you were connected to the copies. Good pace and tone.

[Gill]

You did a great job on both of these reads. I liked the way you made both reads your own.Your pace is good and your flow is smooth. Your voice gives the scripts richness and energy. Nice job!

[mmyers24]

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen to my reads and for the beautiful feedback. I truly appreciate it.

[Carita]

Great Work!

[mmyers24]

Thank you so much!!!!

[Carita]

Great Work!

[ierxyzz]

Hi everyone! I recently began commercial coaching with edge. This is my first crack with the home studio. Any feedback would be helpful. Thanks!

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[nicolance]

dear ierxyzz – technically – your home studio recording sounds clean and at good volume. Your McD read is wonderful – sounds just like people speak in conversation – you are a natural! Diction in a couple of spots can be helped by slowing down with tough words or phrasing like arabica beans . . .keep us the good work – this is really good work! You did not seem as “connected” in the Crocker spot . . .from the words, sounds more like an ad voiced by a motherly sounding woman. Find another spot that supports your voice and style. Lance

[SuperLuke]

Good job with this performance. I hear honest enthusiasm in your voice, especially at the end.
Keep up the good work!

[mmyers24]

Hi ierxyzz, I enjoyed your reads, especially the McDonalds, it was fun, great tempo and flowed all the way through from beginning to end. You have a great voice.

[Lauren A]

Hello everyone! This is my first time posting. I’ve just started coaching in narration, and part of my homework is to post here. I would appreciate some feedback!

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[JoyceVOA]

Hi Lauren. I enjoyed all of your reads. It almost sounded like different people. I thought your pace and tone was very good. I heard a few pauses that could have been shorter but you did really well with the non-english words. Your energy was good all the way through.

[mmyers24]

Hi Lauren, You have such a great voice. I enjoyed all three of your reads. Cosmos was my favorite because I love the feeling you put into it all throughout. It flowed nicely. Just watch out for some of the words getting lost in the airy whispering parts if that makes sense. (I too am working on this). Sanjo was great as well, I loved the flow when you first started, however I noticed that you sped up a little towards the middle but overall it was a really good read. I enjoyed all three. Nice work!

[Lauren A]

Thank you so much for your feedback!

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