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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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June 8, 2022 at 10:56 pm #77291
Elise Duke
ParticipantHi everyone! Would love your feedback on these two samples. Specifically, how was my pace and conversational tone? Any feedback is appreciated!
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June 11, 2022 at 9:08 pm #77361
RBenesVO
ParticipantGreat read. Right pace and tone.
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June 11, 2022 at 5:57 am #77354
QuiceStraughter
ParticipantI like the reads for both of the copies. On the Crest Extender read, I just think it needs a bit more energy, and a bit more “smile”, if that makes sense. Other than that, good job.
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June 8, 2022 at 7:37 pm #77287
cammons01
ParticipantHey everyone! Just uploaded a couple of practice reads. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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June 11, 2022 at 9:11 pm #77362
RBenesVO
ParticipantGreat voice. Some mouth noises at the start of breathes to watch out for. At :12, and I think :20 for example. Maybe slow down just a tad to make it more conversational.
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June 8, 2022 at 11:10 pm #77294
Elise Duke
ParticipantHi cammons01! The American Airlines read started off great! It sounded welcoming and comfortable. The very, very end sounded rushed.
When you’re reading a list (for example, “your flight, your destination AND the equipment…”), it’s been suggested to me to not exaggerate the “and” so as not to draw too much attention to it and rather focus on the other words in the list. You can also vary the tone of your voice for each word in the list. This is feedback I’ve received and am working on this myself. I hope that helps!
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June 8, 2022 at 3:26 pm #77277
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June 7, 2022 at 4:15 pm #77264
JNardecchia
ParticipantReposting my latest with a smaller file size.
1.) When I was experiencing depression, I couldn’t get out of bed or focus on anything. My goals and dreams drifted away. I got my life back with the help of a support group of people who had been where I was. They helped me see that my life wasn’t limited. Visit support-helps-dot-org to learn more. We’ve been there. We can help.
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June 8, 2022 at 7:55 am #77270
Gill
ParticipantGood diction- There are places where your pauses makes the read a little choppy removing those pauses will make the read smoother. Your pace is okay but could be a little faster. I also hear clicks which can be fixed with hydration or just editing out. Keep it up!
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June 7, 2022 at 12:46 pm #77259
JNardecchia
ParticipantHello Forum!
Here are a couple reads, I’ve been working on warm/intimate/dry/raspy reads.
Thanks!
1.) When I was experiencing depression, I couldn’t get out of bed or focus on anything. My goals and dreams drifted away. I got my life back with the help of a support group of people who had been where I was. They helped me see that my life wasn’t limited. Visit support-helps-dot-org to learn more. We’ve been there. We can help.
2.) Bose home theater systems customize their sound to fit your room. Choosing anything less just doesn’t make sense.
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June 7, 2022 at 2:13 am #77230
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June 6, 2022 at 9:40 pm #77221
TimberTykes
ParticipantGood Evening!
Working on yet another recording. I have a feeling I’ve done this one already, but… I like DQ, and my birthday’s next week, so hey, lol.
I don’t have a specific focus tonight, other than the usual- beginning/middle/end, conversational feeling (I kinda have the feeling that the ending doesn’t mesh well with this, but merely my opinion), etc.
Feedback and criticisms of any kind are greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!
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June 6, 2022 at 3:12 pm #77213
Gill
ParticipantHi Everyone!
Would love your feedback I’m working on pauses. Thanks!Attachments:
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June 8, 2022 at 11:28 pm #77295
Elise Duke
ParticipantHi Gill! I agree with Lance in that I didn’t hear any odd or out of place pauses – great job! I loved the overall tone of Clorox – informative, playful and convinces me to want to buy some Clorox wipes!
I also echo Lance’s comment about the Harvey read. I think you can add some changes in your tone to give it a more playful vibe (like the Clorox read). Great work!
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June 6, 2022 at 6:12 pm #77220
nicolance
ParticipantHi Gill – wonderful friendly and conversational reads – but I am not sure what you mean about pauses . . .do you mean in the editing? Otherwise, pauses all seemed natural and not out of place. I think the Harvey spot might have benefited from a little more attitude, especially with the line “now if only he could work the microwave” – Keep up the good work. Lance
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June 5, 2022 at 5:31 pm #77162
smarlowe
ParticipantHello everyone,
Here are two samples for feedback. I’m specifically concerned about sound quality and pacing, but I’d be appreciative of any feedback on any aspect of the samples. Thanks! 🙂
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June 6, 2022 at 11:08 am #77198
JoyceVOA
ParticipantHOP – Hi. I thought you started off well but then got choppy towards the middle. You started to sound more robotic and less conversational. After another listen, I heard emotion in the beginning then you lost it around “This unique”. You seemed to drag out read and reading. Overall I really like your voice. Perfect for the genre.
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June 5, 2022 at 6:17 pm #77165
JAE Factor
ParticipantHello smarlowe, my feedback for your reads is below:
1. Hooked on Phonics – The pacing here was pretty good and the sound quality was clear as well. The only feedback on this one I have is editing out the breaths such as the part, “a few times a week.” Also, at the end when you said “read,” I would emphasize it, but stress it less (seems like you dragged it out a bit). Otherwise, I liked this read!
2. Anxiety PSA – I wasn’t clear what angle you were going for, but I got the impression this was an ominous internal conversation. Is this one supposed to be narration or a commercial? Sorry, I might be missing something here.
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June 5, 2022 at 2:22 pm #77154
JAE Factor
ParticipantThis is a practice sample that I recorded this morning. Please let me know what you think: the good, the bad, and the u**y!
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June 25, 2022 at 12:08 pm #77737
Cheechman
ParticipantIntegral was pronounced great. I say it that way too.
Great voice.
Would work on hiliting the correct words a little.
Maybe try to read it several different ways and listen to all to find the right one.Overall great read!
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June 5, 2022 at 6:40 pm #77166
smarlowe
ParticipantI thought it sounded great! Side note- I think “integral” was mispronounced –IN tuh grahl as opposed to in TAY grahl. Your “our” was spot on though (I always have trouble with that one) Otherwise I really enjoyed it. Your voice and cadence was clear, warm, and engaging.
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