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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #77398
    Ewhite44
    Participant

    Hello –

    I’m requesting feedback on a few practice reads. I’m recording on my phone so please try to disregard the low quality audio. Thanks in advance and best wishes to everyone!

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    • #77463
      rustylj63
      Participant

      Hi, I liked the way you read Bona. The only thing I’d say about it is that it sounded like you said “harwood” instead of hardwood towards the end.
      Google Pixel was also pretty strong. Listen to the way you say Google Pixel at the end, then listen to the way you say it at the beginning. I think the second one sounds a lot better.
      I would have to say the Kia read was my least favorite. It sounds like you don’t have an opinion about it.
      Hope this helps.

      • #77763
        Ewhite44
        Participant

        Thank you, I really appreciate all of the feedback!

  • #77393
    RBenesVO
    Participant

    Hey all, homework feedback time! Thanks in advance.

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    • #77464
      rustylj63
      Participant

      Hey, Yeah… EWhite was spot on, your tempo increased pretty significantly at that point in the motel 6 read.
      You’ve got a strong voice and you read well (no diction, enunciation problems). But I wonder what you think of buying Nissan. I couldn’t really hear your opinion in the read.

    • #77403
      Ewhite44
      Participant

      Motel 6: Great voice! Audio sounded perfect. The only thing I noticed was that you seemed to pick up speed when you first said “Motel 6 recently got an updo of sorts”. Not sure if you meant to or not. I laughed at the joke at the end so your funny came across.

      Nissan: Sounded good! Lots of words. Lol. I noticed something I’m not sure how to describe when you got to the word “us”. Otherwise, great!

      • #77410
        RBenesVO
        Participant

        You’re right, I didn’t separate with-us. And turned it into withus. Thank you! I appreciate the feedback and for laughing at the prior read lol.

  • #77378
    rustylj63
    Participant

    Hey Folks,
    It’s almost demo time… I could really use some honest feedback. Please don’t worry about the recording quality, I’m sitting at my desk, in an untreated room, with the fan blowing because it’s HOT! Seriously though, I’d love your honest feedback on my narrations.
    Thanks in advance!

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    • #77405
      Ewhite44
      Participant

      Great reads! I have similar feedback regarding energy in the 4H read. That energy works well for Advanced Technologies though. Thanks for letting us provide feedback!

    • #77396
      RBenesVO
      Participant

      Good reads. Perhaps add a little more energy in the 4H read. For advanced technologies I’d offer the same, particularly where you mentioned the “excitement and challenges”. When you state “Advanced Technologies” is sounds like Advance Technologies as the words are compressed together a bit. Without running your audio through my DAW I didn’t think the quality was bad lol, but since you said it was untreated I’ll leave it as such. Great work, good luck on the Demo! I recently finished my first one and and starting work towards #2.

  • #77367
    Nailah
    Participant

    Good Day All,

    I have a couple of practice reads. Any feedback would be appreciated! Thank you in advance!

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    • #77381
      rustylj63
      Participant

      Hi Nailah,

      You’ve got a great sounding voice, for the most part your pitch and tempo are very good. In “Milk”I heard your volume change a couple of times and in both pieces there are some words you are not finishing. With sounds like wit in a couple of places and you dropped a couple of Ks.
      In Carnation, again, voice is great, I wonder if the tempo might be just a little slow though. You dropped the last letter on a couple of words in this one too (breakfas & coul (instead of could).
      You’re sounding good though.

  • #77355
    marioh5
    Participant

    Hi all! I’m looking for feedback for my 1st practice recording, any & all feedback is greatly appreciated!

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    • #77383
      rustylj63
      Participant

      Hey Marioh,

      Congrats on your first practice recording. I agree with both RBenes and Gill. This was a great first post! A couple of things I noticed was (as RBenes noted) a fluctuation in your volume (probably moving around the mic). A biggy though is the mispronunciation of arboretum you pronounced it ar-bor-ay-tum and it should be ar-bor-ee-tum. If you are unsure of pronunciation, most online dictionaries will provide pronunciations as well. Hey, it happens to all of us. I got busted on a word today. I was pronouncing it with a mid-west dialectal sound which is great in the mid-west, but its pronouced differently every where else. Also, when you said “scroll” it sounded to me like you were saying “shcroll” both times you said it.

      Keep it up man. It only gets better with practice!

      • #77388
        marioh5
        Participant

        Thank you! Great feedback, especially pointing out mispronouncing words, good stuff!

    • #77373
      Gill
      Participant

      Nice strong introduction on your first practice read. I agree with RBenesVO when you get to a list of items try to vary them instead of just reading across the board. As your read speed increased your diction slurs when you say tour it sounds like chore. Once again when you have common words such as Use try to vary them and as you give instructions slow your pace instead of speeding it up. Keep it up!

      • #77384
        marioh5
        Participant

        Excellent feedback, just what I need!

    • #77363
      RBenesVO
      Participant

      Great work on knocking out your first practice recording. Voice fits it really nice. Consider adding a change in pitch/inflection when listing different things separated by a comma. A couple mouth clicks but no distracting large breaths which is good. There is a change in volume at I believe 0:18 where you begin describing the tabs. You may have changed position with the microphone at that point. I have noticed I’ll do that sometimes when I get animated and start acting out what I’m saying and inadvertently look towards something else and the change in positioning is noticeable in the recording. Different mics are more susceptible as mine is. But, now that I’ve gone long winded, nice work!

      • #77382
        marioh5
        Participant

        Thanks for the feedback! Very useful and on point!

  • #77347
    anlevine95
    Participant

    Hey all!

    here’s 4 reads I made w/ two versions on each mp3. no need to listen to all just trying to get diversity of reads on each copy. appreciate any and all feedback. Thanks.

    Adam

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  • #77343
    Alli
    Participant

    Hello, Im practicing my VO and would love some feedback. I know my audio is terrible but aside from that please let me know how Im doing with my narration vocals. If you can please me know how Im doing with: my diction and articulation, my pacing, delivery, and if my voice matches this narration script.

    I understand that I sound pretty young and youthful but I am almost 30yrs old, and after getting used to hearing my own voice, Im still trying to find my niche. Thanks!

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    • #77385
      rustylj63
      Participant

      Hi Alli,

      I think Gill gave you some great advice. I heard the same things she was talking about in both narrations. You’re pauses are long in places and it does create some confusion… it’s like is she done, oh nope… not done there’s more. Also, there were a few times you pronounced “the” more like “duh” your th sound is coming out like a d in a few places.
      One last little note… can you turn up the gain on your microphone? Your recordings were very quiet and whenever a listener turns up the volume they’re going to hear a little extra noise.

      • #77421
        Alli
        Participant

        Just scheduled a session with Pen-Pen!

    • #77374
      Gill
      Participant

      You have a nice soft voice thats youthful.
      Risewell:
      I would be careful when pronouncing client’s products as I believe Risewell is mispronounced it sounds like you’re saying rinse well. There are lots of pauses in between your read which makes it a little awkward to listen to you can remove spaces with your editing so everything is combined and sounds smoother.

      Type 2 Learn:
      This was a very cute read, You gave this read good energy and the pace was on spot for instructional. I would just be mindful of the dead spaces in between your reads. Keep it up!

      • #77377
        Alli
        Participant

        I really appreciate your feedback. I was actually saying rinsewell and didnt know it, so thanks for catching that! I will keep the pauses in mind as well, I was told to slow down my pace, so Im still finding that balance but I will definitely be practicing my audio edits by editing out those pauses.

        • #77402
          Gill
          Participant

          Yes, there’s so much to keep track of when you’re learning, we’re all there with you! Keep at it and it will start to piece together!

    • #77359
      RBenesVO
      Participant

      You have a very pleasant voice. The diction and articulation seem right about where they should be though the volume seemed a bit low. Is it normalized to -3db?

      • #77376
        Alli
        Participant

        I will have to play around with the audio a bit more but I really appreciate your feedback! Thanks!

  • #77335
    gikegami
    Participant

    Here is my recording of two commercials. I’d appreciate any feedback, mainly on delivery or pacing. Thank you

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    • #77734
      Cheechman
      Participant

      Need to work on the slurring of certain words. Add more excitement and less hi nots.
      Very articulate and good pace.

    • #77360
      RBenesVO
      Participant

      Great energy in the reads. I would work on identifying which words where more inflection is needed. I think I’m hearing mouth clicks or mouth noises which could be edited out with something like iZotope RX or other plugin providers. Green apples work too!

  • #77321
    CMcHugh
    Participant

    Hi everyone, posting two reads for homework, any feedback would be much appreciated 😊

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  • #77297
    QuiceStraughter
    Participant

    Hey, everyone. I used to post a lot of recordings before this website had been revamped. So this will be my first recording in three years. I found a copy on this website. I basically tried to memorize the script to see if it would make it sound more authentic. The copy seemed eerie to me so I went for a darker take.

    In this world, there is real evil.
    In the darkest shadows and in the most ordinary places.
    These are the true stories of the innocent and the unimaginable.
    Between the things we see and the things we fear, there are doors.
    When they are opened,
    Nightmares become reality.

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    • #77338
      gikegami
      Participant

      I liked the tone of your voice and how you delivered it. However, one slight mistake you made was that you said “imaginable”, rather than “unimaginable”. Maybe you could also try highlighting some more key words, like doors. Great job overall.

      • #77353
        QuiceStraughter
        Participant

        Shoot! I didn’t catch that when I was recording. Haha. I was so busy trying to memorize the script. Thanks for the critique. I really appreciate it.

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