[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[monibr16]

Hey everyone. FInishing my list for my demo. Focusing on audience, glottal stops, and clarity. All notes welcome!

Coffee mate
(Yawn) There it is, my best friend in the morning. All I need is the rich and delicious taste of coffee mate to help me be me, every morning. Coffee mate. Coffee’s perfect mate.

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[debbyc]

Nice read! the only feedback I have is to possibly put more emphasis on “rich and delicious taste”

[Earthbul]

No activity on this forum all week. Ya’ll producing or what ?

[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback appreciated.
Btw, is the music too overpowering ?

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[Adam Cannon]

Great pacing and diction, I would say you could go a level down on the music

[Earthbul]

Thanks for the feedback Adam. I always question music volume on my spots. Listened to your Haunted spot. Would love to hear one of your more conversational reads.

[Earthbul]

Practice read. Any and all critiques and comments welcomed and appreciated.

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[Honeyvoice]

A struggle But it was fun

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[Earthbul]

Once again recorded in the car lol any and all comments or critiques are welcomed and appreciated.

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[ierxyzz]

Happy new year, everyone! For these practice reads, I’m working on avoiding up-talk and shortening the pauses between lines to keep the flow sharp and engaging. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

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[Earthbul]

I really both of these reads. You kept me engaged with a quick pace and great enunciation. Nice spacing in the edits. Really clean sound as well.

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[Joseph Thompson]

I’m working on material for my demo and need some input on how believable, relaxed and comfortable I sound. Is my diction clear enough, and do I enunciate so that all my words can be heard? Thanks for taking the time to give me some constructive feedback.

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[Earthbul]

I have to agree with the others. A bit choppyand breathy. Could benefit with a quicker pace. Love the accent brother.

[ierxyzz]

Hey Joseph, you have great diction here. I understood everything perfectly. I agree with mike about breaks between words, especially in your Brinox read. Great reads!

[Mike Koziol]

Hi Joseph, You have a strong voice and solid enunciation. I found that your tempo was a bit choppy with long breaks between words. Sounds like your commas in the sentences are over emphasized.

Hope this helps.

[Joseph Thompson]

Great feedback, thanks Mike!

[alayne_chappell]

Trying one more time since the Upstart one is a bit distorted now (seems to have happened after reducing the file size – hence I’m not familiar with the tech yet) 🙂 Hopefully this one works!

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[alayne_chappell]

Looks like the third read didn’t upload with my post so adding again here, thanks!

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