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The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication.
Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!
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“This does all seem rather bizarre. We are familiar with the world around us where everything behaves as we would expect. An apple falls from the tree to the ground according to classical laws. It all makes sense, but, at the very small we see classical laws break down. In the quantum world, particles behave in a weird way. They can be in different places at the same time. A cloud of possibilities. This is the strange world of quantum theory.”
Took some time off, getting back into the training and practice. Any feedback is appreciated, thanks for listening.
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Hello all! Looking for any and all criticism for upcoming commercial demo – thank you!
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Your voice is nice and clear. But your tone is very mono tone. Try to hit certian words and add some spice to your dialog.
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My attempt at a live announcement… I have heard a variety of ranges/styles, but I don’t think I have found the right one for me yet. 🙂
Good afternoon passengers. This is the pre-boarding announcement for flight 89B to Rome. We are now inviting those passengers with small children, and any passengers requiring special assistance, to begin boarding at this time. Please have your boarding pass and identification ready. Regular boarding will begin in approximately ten minutes time. Thank you.
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Hi all! I’m posting a read for feedback in prep for my commercial demo – thanks for any and all comments!
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You have nice voice, but its easy to tell you are reading. Keep working on it and think about changing tempo a little and hit certain words to emphasize key points
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Hey there, I like your voice for this read. You sound like a sophisticated lady. I think the flow could use some work meaning there are some pauses that you could smooth out, and not pausing between ideas – you can smooth out places like “color where (pause) it’s needed most” doesn’t need the pause. There also sounded like there was a question mark at the end of “needed most. Every time.” I’ve done this too a few times I naturally go up in pitch sometimes and it sounds like a question mark, but this is a definitive statement and a strong opinion you have because this hair color product is just so great! Keep working on it! You have a nice sophisticated vocal tone 🙂
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Hello! The tempo here flowed well in your reading. Perhaps when you say “me, me” emphasis the second me. I did notice between some words and sentences you had a tendency to do a clicking sound, particularly between “beautiful. I like being me.” Otherwise a good read!
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Oops… I thought I replaced the first one as the first breath needed to be edited out. But now they are both there. hee..hee…Thanks for the feedback alls y’all! Happy Friday!
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Hello all! Here’s a telephony read as part of my narration homework.
Again, I don’t have any recording equipment (yet), and this was recorded on a mobile app.
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Hi kfvoice – nice job on the AMEX commercial. It sounds very smooth and believable. I feel that your voice could put people at ease when on hold, which can be stressful, meaning that this type of work would be good for you. Good job!
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Nice work. You have a nice voice for this type of content. I would say you may want to work on pronunciation as there were some words that were slurring together a bit, particularly on the line “To see if you can take advantage of this free service;” Sometimes when I have a hard time with slurring I put a pen between my teeth and say the phrase slowly trying to say each work – it was a suggestion on the vocal health or technique webinar. Keep it up!
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Hi ladies and gents! Here is another read. I normalized it to about -3db. Got a new interface with a bit less self-noise than my focusrite. Anyways. I appreciate any feedback.
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Hello! I am new to the field, and am uploading the first reading of my narration assignment. Any and all feedback is welcome!
I decided to read a script for a Web Promo Video under Internet Audio. My recording is under 60 seconds, but appears longer on here.
(Please Note: This audio was recorded in a quiet space on a mobile app. Clicks and pops are evident.)
Web Promo Video
Meet Steve Hudson, owner of Hudson’s Cafe. This year, he opened location number twelve. Business is good… ‘cause the food is good.
But there’s still work to do. See that pick-up and delivery counter? It’s got real potential, but Jessica can’t seem to crack the code.
Jessica handles marketing for Hudson’s Cafe. Her team manages the new web site and the Facebook following. But what she’s about to propose will turn those marketing channels into real business growth. It’s called ChowNow.
ChowNow puts your pick-up and delivery business online with simple, integrated ordering for your web site, your facebook page, and the custom iPhone app ChowNow creates just for you. Welcome to online and mobile ordering, Steve. You’re about to make some money.
Go online and go mobile with…
ChowNow
We can take your orders.
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Hi kfvoice, just listened to your read. I’m glad you recorded in a quiet place where you wouldn’t have background noise. I think for this Web promo video, add more than 1 neutral emotion in your read, like gradually inserting three emotions in the delivery. It will make the promo more successful because you may decide to insert a smile in your voice as you perform “Meet Steve”, you might feel bummed out when you say, “But there’s work to do”, and then you may decide to be super excited about what Jessica is about to do.
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