[David Goldberg]

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[RYoung]

Recent audition I did for a video game promo. Got a listen from producer. Possibly wanted more animated voice? Any thoughts are welcome!

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[DillonP]

Seems pretty good so far, but could use more enthusiasm and slow down a little in your narration. other than that I think it was a fine promo that you did. Just make sure to keep up the good work.

[DillonP]

It took me some time but I finally got my HW for coaching done. please listen and reply.

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[RYoung]

Try to slow down your delivery to eliminate slurring. Your voice is friendly and realistic though!

[SteveVO]

Trying a bit of a longer audiobook script – Dracula. Thanks for any feedback.

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[RYoung]

Nice work on the narration and storytelling end. I was captivated, my only suggestion would be Dracula’s voice could have a different tone (scary) and maybe a pause in anticipation before Dracula speaks?

[Shaun Cruz]

Hi All just looking for some feedback on these 3 submissions for home work.

Thanks!

FORD ESCAPE:
Come on. You’re a smart person. If you’re buying an suv, why not get the one with the best gas mileage? The Ford Escape’s 1.6 liter Ecoboost engine saves you an average of fifteen hundred dollars on gas over 5 years. Ford Escape the smarter way to get there.

USPS:Tangled lights, mall parking and “some assembly required”. A few reasons to get a head start on the holidays. Fly Like an Eagle. UNITED STATES POSTAL SERVICE. We deliver.

OBSERVATION DECK:
Hello, and welcome to the audio simulation of the One Vanderbilt Observation Deck.
Please adjust your audio volume to a level that best represents my voice at a normal speaking volume to a person standing next to you.
This will calibrate your headphone level. Please do not adjust your audio volume again over the course of the simulation.

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[RYoung]

I liked the Ford Escape delivery, relaxed and realistic sounding. Sounds like some words are not enunciated right? like “dollars”, minor but it can make a difference. The USPS was a little formal, I would smile on delivery of the tag line UNITED STATES POSTAL SERVICE and highlight we deliver with a different tone? Nice work on these!

[Shaun Cruz]

Hi! Thanks for the feedback and the tips I’ll definitely keep them in mind!

[IvyEdgeCEO]

Hi Shaun – I hope you find this feedback helpful: Ford Escape – I like the way your intimate tone at the start pulls in the listener, like letting us in on a secret; USPS – I liked the just-the-facts energy of this read; Observation Deck – I could really imagine myself on an observation deck and hearing your voice walking me through a guided tour. Good job on all!

[Shaun Cruz]

Hi! Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated!

[IvyEdgeCEO]

Take two…

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[jphilippitheactor]

I love the Documentary and About Us demos, they showcase your personality more, if that makes sense, and you came alive! The other 2 are decent, well-articulated, more corporate, but, didn’t hear you as well as in the other two. But awesome job!

[IvyEdgeCEO]

Homework assignment for my 1st narration demo session

[IvyEdgeCEO]

Hm. Don’t know why this didn’t work. Will have to go back and try again?

[Tom_Connelly]

New homework assignment

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[IvyEdgeCEO]

I like the pace, energy as well as the pitch modulations towards the end. Good work!

[ILMVOMan]

Hey all. Here’s my first stab at this. Comments and feedback plz.

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[SteveVO]

Trying an audiobook script of The Emperor’s New Clothes. Thanks for any feedback.

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[Shaun Cruz]

Loved it! Perfect pace, pulls your audience right in. Entertaining.. Keep it up!

[SteveVO]

Thanks! I appreciate it very much.

[Erik B]

Hello everybody. Below is a commercial practice read I worked on. Please feel free to provide feedback on performance and recording quality.
Thank you.

Your Smile

Your smile says a lot about you. If you let it. When you’re uncomfortable about your teeth, it’s easy to hold back your smile. Invisalign’s advanced technology now lets you straighten your teeth invisibly – so you can express yourself fully. And because they’re invisible, no one has to know about it. Hundreds of thousands of people already have discovered Invisalign. Maybe it’s time you were one of them.

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[IvyEdgeCEO]

I really liked the pace and tone; it sounds like a voice I would hear on an Invisalign infomercial. I also liked the little laugh during “no one has to know about it.” Makes the read very warm and relatable.

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