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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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December 6, 2021 at 8:31 pm #72765
SteveVO
ParticipantTrying an audiobook script of The Emperor’s New Clothes. Thanks for any feedback.
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December 8, 2021 at 1:04 am #72795
Shaun Cruz
ParticipantLoved it! Perfect pace, pulls your audience right in. Entertaining.. Keep it up!
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December 6, 2021 at 6:43 pm #72761
Erik B
ParticipantHello everybody. Below is a commercial practice read I worked on. Please feel free to provide feedback on performance and recording quality.
Thank you.Your Smile
Your smile says a lot about you. If you let it. When you’re uncomfortable about your teeth, it’s easy to hold back your smile. Invisalign’s advanced technology now lets you straighten your teeth invisibly – so you can express yourself fully. And because they’re invisible, no one has to know about it. Hundreds of thousands of people already have discovered Invisalign. Maybe it’s time you were one of them.
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December 9, 2021 at 3:11 pm #72819
IvyEdgeCEO
ParticipantI really liked the pace and tone; it sounds like a voice I would hear on an Invisalign infomercial. I also liked the little laugh during “no one has to know about it.” Makes the read very warm and relatable.
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December 5, 2021 at 8:49 am #72727
Bil-Bo
ParticipantAMSTEL
Hey… if life were perfect, magazines would never smell like perfume, dogs would walk themselves, and algebra would actually come in handy. Well, look on the bright side, at least there’s AMSTEL LIGHT. It has only 95 calories, but you still get real imported taste. Who says nothing’s perfect?…Amstel Light.Duracell Quantum Batterie
SFX: Children Giggling: Then Music Under
This Duracell truck has some very special power.
It’s filled with new Duracell Quantum batteries.
These red batteries are so powerful that this year
they’ll power all the Hasbro toys donated to “Toys for Tots”.
Wanna help power some smiles?
SFX: Children Giggling: Then Music Under
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December 5, 2021 at 8:47 am #72725
Bil-Bo
ParticipantAMSTEL
Hey… if life were perfect, magazines would never smell like perfume, dogs would walk themselves, and algebra would actually come in handy. Well, look on the bright side, at least there’s AMSTEL LIGHT. It has only 95 calories, but you still get real imported taste. Who says nothing’s perfect?…Amstel Light.Duracell Quantum Batterie
SFX: Children Giggling: Then Music Under
This Duracell truck has some very special power.
It’s filled with new Duracell Quantum batteries.
These red batteries are so powerful that this year
they’ll power all the Hasbro toys donated to “Toys for Tots”.
Wanna help power some smiles?
SFX: Children Giggling: Then Music Under
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December 4, 2021 at 2:31 pm #72717
smith_voice
ParticipantGreetings- My latest commercial homework for Art. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!
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December 6, 2021 at 5:30 pm #72758
Erik B
ParticipantHi Mr. Smith,
I checked out your reads, and wanted to provide my feedback.
Human Society – Good tone and good pacing. I noticed upspeak at the end of the first and second sentence, watch out for that. Also maybe add a bit of differentiation b/w abandoned, some sick or injured.
Machine Learning – good tone and good pacing, but it sounded slighly robotic. Also watch out for the glottal between “nature and”.
Zellers – good differentiation b/w men, kid’s and ladies. But the read could have used a little more pep. Imagine if Crazy Eddie did this read. You don’t have to be that over the top, but just give the read a bit more excitement.
Overall good job.
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December 3, 2021 at 1:25 pm #72704
salmaperez001
ParticipantHello, hope everyone had wonderful holidays! I have attached my Commercial recordings below! I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback. Thank you!
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December 2, 2021 at 3:34 pm #72682
Andres
ParticipantJust looking for any feedback that you might think is helpful, trying to practice for my Narration Demo so I appreciate whatever advice you may have.
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December 6, 2021 at 6:39 pm #72760
Erik B
ParticipantHi Andres,
I listened to your read, and I thought it was good. The tone and pacing of the read are solid. Also you differentiate between sentences nicely. The only suggestion I have is slowing down, “hello and welcome”. Also may I suggest next time you post on the forum, include the copy of the read. It allows listeners to better analyze your performance, and provide more helpful feedback.
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December 2, 2021 at 5:15 am #72668
edward
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December 1, 2021 at 8:38 pm #72656
Mark.OD
ParticipantI would love to get some feedback on these pieces. Just started the narration track and am working to find that authentic voice while considering varying audiences.
(Also, it’s my first upload and I hope I did this correctly. Any help is appreciated)
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December 1, 2021 at 7:23 pm #72652
LSlagle519
ParticipantHere are a few more reads I worked on last week. The scripts are from the Harvey Home Theatre and Motel 6 scripts in the library.
Harvey Home Theatre
He has a 160 IQ, performs cardiac surgery for a living. And now, he can even operate his home entertainment system. Introducing Harvey Home Theater. It’s so sophisticated, it’s simple. Dimensions of sight and sound unheard of, until now. All at your fingertips. Now, if he could only operate the microwave. Home Theater from Harvey, not your ordinary electronics store. Call for the Harvey near you.Motel 6 Do Over
I’ve just been hearing about this trendy new hairstyle called a man bun. I mean what’s next the hee hive? well Motel 6 recently got a new updo of sorts too with renovations nationwide and even with our fresh modern look you’ll still find rooms at the lowest price of any national chain so you can save up enough money to get yourself a haircut or maybe a hat.
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December 1, 2021 at 8:42 pm #72660
Mark.OD
ParticipantI thought the first one was excellent in it’s authenticity. The pace was quite effective as well. I thought the second was not quite as authentic, it was a little “acty”, if I may coin that word. Your voice is perfect for both pieces and the sound quality rocks.
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