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The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication.
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Hi Mr. Smith,
I checked out your reads, and wanted to provide my feedback.
Human Society – Good tone and good pacing. I noticed upspeak at the end of the first and second sentence, watch out for that. Also maybe add a bit of differentiation b/w abandoned, some sick or injured.
Machine Learning – good tone and good pacing, but it sounded slighly robotic. Also watch out for the glottal between “nature and”.
Zellers – good differentiation b/w men, kid’s and ladies. But the read could have used a little more pep. Imagine if Crazy Eddie did this read. You don’t have to be that over the top, but just give the read a bit more excitement.
Overall good job.
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Just looking for any feedback that you might think is helpful, trying to practice for my Narration Demo so I appreciate whatever advice you may have.
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Hi Andres,
I listened to your read, and I thought it was good. The tone and pacing of the read are solid. Also you differentiate between sentences nicely. The only suggestion I have is slowing down, “hello and welcome”. Also may I suggest next time you post on the forum, include the copy of the read. It allows listeners to better analyze your performance, and provide more helpful feedback.
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Here are a few more reads I worked on last week. The scripts are from the Harvey Home Theatre and Motel 6 scripts in the library.
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So, I’m REALLY struggling to hammer out my “natural” delivery, and I’ve been running around in circles. Any help or feedback would be VERY appreciated. Thanks!
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Hi Everybody!
I’m now training on commercial reads.
Feedback is always appreciated!!!
Thanks!
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OPEN TO FEEDBACK GUYS! THANKS!
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Hi, everyone! I would love to get some feedback on this documentary-type read about beavers. Thanks!
Script: The b****r builds its lodge out of intertangled twigs and sticks; as freezing weather nears, they plaster their lodge with mud, making a concrete layer that no predator can break through. During the early nineteenth century, the b****r pelt was the single most valuable commodity; the pelt being used for robes, coats, clothing trims, and top hats.
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YOU’RE SO GOOD!!! Teach me your pacing ways!!! Your read was super clear and easy to understand. Even if you were explaining something complicated, your pace and diction were so clear that I had time to think about what you were saying as you read. I think you would also do well as an audiobook narrator.
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That’s very kind of you. Thanks 🙂 For this particular script, I pictured myself inside the b****r’s lodge and pictured myself explaining it to someone, while we were watching the b****r do things. I looked for a bit of a hushed tone (so the b****r couldn’t hear me :-), and I find that I purposely slow my pace down for others, to help them absorb everything.
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