[David Goldberg]

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[Provocaleric]

Dear Mir,

You have a clear, sweet tone with good diction. I would only criticize your pacing should pick up and add more flow, plus I think you miss pronounced Marauders. I appreciate you and wish you all the best, keep getting better and take care!

[Provocaleric]

Thank you Chloe, I appreciate it

[mir19800]

Hello Everyone,
I uploaded this file and would love your feedback. Your words of wisdom and suggestions will be greatly appreciated. Thanking you in advance.

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[Provocaleric]

Hello fellow friendly voice pals!

I was hoping to borrow your professional ears for a comment or two about this medical read genre I am considering for my demo. I picked a relatively easy word difficulty read to start with. Here is the script.
Blood Glucose Meters

f you have diabetes, using a blood glucose meter is very important. It helps you keep your blood sugar within a healthy range. They don’t all look like this one, but they all pretty much work the same way. You provide a drop of blood, and the meter tells you what your glucose level is. Don’t get freaked out, it’s just a little pinch, and using the meter is really easy. The first thing to do is to load a test s***p into the meter. That’s a little piece of paper that reacts with your blood.

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[chloeblackstone]

Hi Provocaleric! Your voice is very smooth, clear, and professional! Since this read is all about Blood Glucose Meters, I would make sure to emphasize the words “blood glucose meter” in the first sentence. My other recommendation is to picture someone you are speaking to throughout the copy. Great job, overall. keep it up!

[Provocaleric]

Dear Chloe,
You have a friendly, clear and pleasant tone! If I had to criticize, I would say maybe you could have a bit more contrast with your tone on keywords and phrasing and maybe just a wee bit faster of a read overall, otherwise your awesome! Please feel free to read my for critique as well, thank you and I wish nothing but the best for you!

[Provocaleric]

Amelia Earhart
Amelia Earhart dared to go where no one had gone before. The public adored the pioneering pilot. And news reels of the day captured her every move. Yet the private side of Amelia would always remain an enigma.

House with Nobody Home
Whenever I walk to Suffern along the Erie track
I go by a poor old farmhouse with its shingles broken and black.
I suppose I’ve passed it a hundred times, but I always stop for a minute
And look at the house, the tragic house, the house with nobody in it.

[Provocaleric]

Dear lovely Edge Artists,

As so many of us in here are getting are demos ready, please give me a hand and I will do the same for you if you would please take a listen to a couple of reads I borrowed from from the Edge script library

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[manchilda]

Strong read on Amelia Earhart, though it possibly sounded a little too cheerful as well. It seems you have a happy sounding voice based upon the other comment!

[RoxyMel]

Hi! As far as the house with nobody in it goes, I like this.the middle part is particularly strong. I may have though the end was possibly a little too cheerful sounding for the meaning I interpreted.

[Provocaleric]

Hello Ray,
You have a clear tone with good pacing but I would like to see a little more energy in your reads. Maybe a little brighter tone to add to your already friendly read. Thank you for letting me review your work. Please feel free to review mine as well, thank you Ray

[raymazebarnes]

Good evening,

I am uploading a few things that I have worked on over the past few weeks. Would love to get your feedback as I am looking to record my demo in the near future.

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[chloeblackstone]

Hi y’all! I would appreciate any feedback on this virtual campus tour video copy I’m considering for my narration demo. What could I do to improve this read? Thanks in advanced for listening!

-Chloe

“The Rutgers New Brunswick Campus, on the banks of the Raritan river, is located in Central New Jersey. One hour from New York City, Philadelphia, the Jersey Shore and Ski Resorts! The 22,00 acre Rutgers Community includes 5 residential campuses with a variety of settings, from Farmland, to a traditional northeastern college setting with historic ivy covered stone halls. Students enjoy green lawns, campus quads, and vibrant student centers. plus, a college town with boutiques, shops, four-star restaurants, hotels, and a theater district just a short walk away.”

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[KMcClintock]

Hey Chloe,

I like how friendly you sound in your read and you speak really well, I understood everything you said. For improvement you could speed up the read a little bit and maybe be talking to someone like you are giving a tour to potential students and you’re excited to share information about the campus. Hope this helps!

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