Sorry I had a hard time listening to your read because your audio sounded hollow and tinny. But if I had to say anything I would say your a very down to earth guy and your choices you took during the read were good, after hearing the read I personally would consider going to this store to try on some shoes, good luck
Beautiful job! I admire your choices during that read, your clear tone and pacing was great, the only thing I could say to criticize you on anything would be to add a little smoother transition from phrase to phrase, less sing songy, but really quite amazing. nice work
I thought your read was very professional and sounded good, but my rookie ears think you should pick up the tempo some just to give it a little more umph! Nice job..:)
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I applaud you putting yourself up for review, that can a big step. I want to start by saying your voice is clear and your pronunciations are great! If I had to critique your reads I would say you need to connect more with what your reading and do less reading if you know what I mean and add a little more musicality to your phrasing plus know where to hit your key words, we have to sell this stuff. Great job overall and I wish you the best!
Dear Airbear,
It sounds very good! Your voice is upbeat, friendly and clear with a nice little tone! The only thing I would say would be to add a little more musicality to your reads, but it sounds very good. Take care and good luck
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You have a clear, sweet tone with good diction. I would only criticize your pacing should pick up and add more flow, plus I think you miss pronounced Marauders. I appreciate you and wish you all the best, keep getting better and take care!
Hi Jae,
I agree with everything Chloe said lol, but I do want to say your voice has certain lively clarity that makes me want to listen, so keep at it and you’re on your way to awesome instructional reads