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Hi Tim! I think this was good for you. It flowed well, good tempo, was conversational and appropriately upbeat with good enthusiasm for the product. Good job!
Mary
Hi Chas! Both reads were very good. Your voice is well-suited for this genre. You have a really warm and strong, clear voice. The pacing and tone was good throughout, very convincing mental pictures to describe the cars. Keep it up!
Mary
Hi Fleishman – these were really good reads! I liked them both. You have a very friendly and warm voice that was very clear and helpful sounding for this genre. Good flow and variation in pitch for both of them. Really solid work!
Mary
Hi Kathy, thanks for the feedback! Great, I’m glad you can see some improvement – yeah! You are right about the emphasis on FIRST STATE BANK, especially noting the way it is written in all caps. I will work on that. Thanks again!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback RYoung! I will work on portraying a more enthusiastic tone towards the bank, that does make sense. Thanks again!
Mary
Thanks for the feedback Tim! I will work on the tone to avoid a narration-like sound for the read and think about the specific listener. Thanks!
Mary
Hi all! Here is my daily recording (done on my phone) for your feedback. Thank you!
Mary
First State Bank
In today’s world, everyone needs a bank they can rely on. But, unfortunately, most modern banks are just too big to provide the kind of attention and service you need. First State Bank is the exception. At First State, you’ll discover that banking can be personal and friendly, as well as modern and efficient. FIRST STATE BANK. Today’s bank.Hi Kathy! You are right, I think there are words that are pronounced differently depending on where you live, caviar is probably one of those words! lol. I think I’m over-sensitive to reading any lines monotone so when I hear it my ears perk up as something to never do, but that may only apply to how I’m reading things. So much to learn! 🙂
Mary
