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Hi RYoung! This sounds great! Very good sound and well produced. Good flow and pacing, very professional.
Mary
Hi Dante! Love your voice! So nice, deep and rich. Great clarity, pacing and emphasis on the appropriate words in all of them
Script 1: This sounded really good for you, good energy and decisive-sounding. Good smile in your voice.
Script 2: This sounded like you were trying to be more serious than your natural tone (not sure if that’s true, just what I’m hearing), and because of that did not seem as authentic to me. It had some variation in tone, but could use maybe a little more?
Script 3: This was good! It sounded believable and helpful. Also good smile and decisive tone. Good work!Mary
Hello all! Here is my daily recording (done on my phone) for any and all feedback. The script cracked me up. Thank you!
Mary
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Mary
Hi RYoung! Great reading and production. Great pauses throughout, which gives the listener time to think after each question. Your voice sounds really good for this genre! Great job!
Mary
Hi SFish! Really nice! I like how warm and sweet your voice sounds, seems really good for this genre. Very clear and good pacing and pauses throughout. Very good!
Mary
Hi Katelyn! This was good. It felt a tiny bit rushed to me between sentences but overall was very clear and flowed really well. Your voice is naturally friendly and happy-sounding and that’s a good thing! I think you can be friendly and informative, and it actually helps the read too if you are interested in the topic, which you appear to be. Keep it up!
Mary
Hi Sabpierotti! Nice job. You sounded very authentic and invested in the script. You have a nice warm tone which is good for this genre. Great!
Mary
Hi Sabpierotti! Nice read! I like the clarity, tone and pacing, and with pauses in the right places to help the listener get the message. Good job!
Mary
