[mkell755]

Hi Sfish! This was great. I too struggle to sound enthusiastic without sounding fake, but I think you did a great job of projecting energy into this read and making it sound authentic and upbeat. I could sense the smile in your voice. Great job!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Sabpierotti, great read! Very good tone, energy and pacing. It did seem just a tiny bit rushed at the end of questions, but not by much. I like the texture and rasp in your voice that appears to come naturally and makes it sound nice and conversational. Very good!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Katelyn! This was really nice! I think kids narration would be really good for you! You have a very naturally friendly warm voice that would be interesting for kids to listen to and learn from. Good flow and energy throughout. Very good!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Bil-Bo! Great reading, music and production. I have to agree with Sabpierotti in that the giggles sound a little too unnatural. I like the tone of your voice on this one, very good fit. Keep it up!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Kathy! Great read! Very clear and flowed really well in a conversational tone. Really good job!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi everyone! Here is a recording for your review (recorded on my phone). I would appreciate any and all feedback. Thank you!

Mary

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When you think of Atlanta Bread Company, don’t just think ‘bread’. Think of an entire breakfast menu – fresh-baked pastries, hot breakfast sandwiches and specialty coffees. Think of our Cafe with signature paninis, daily soups and crisp salads. And don’t forget…we can cater your next special event or meeting! Atlanta Bread Company – more than just bread.

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[mkell755]

Hi Bill – This is great! Very professional read and production. I agree with others, this sounds like a commercial that’s already out there – I can’t think of anything to critique on this one. It sounds very natural and friendly and makes me want to think about trying a Ford! Great!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi SFish – good read! Your voice sounds well-suited for Burt’s Bees. Good pauses and emphasis on the appropriate words. Very good!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Robert, these sounds really good! Your voice is perfect for this genre, it sounds very authentic. I think the voice level is better than last night too. Very good!

Mary

[mkell755]

Hi Tim! I liked this read, I think you do sound warm and inviting. My only critique is that the last “Freshii” seems too quiet; it’s the last time you mention the product name and I think it should be emphasized more to make it stand out. Good job on this one!

Mary

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