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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #59708
    mkell755
    Participant

    Thanks for the feedback MrTripo9! I’m working to sound authentic and natural, so glad that others can hear it. Thanks!

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59707
    mkell755
    Participant

    Thanks for the feedback Beckolin! Good points. I need to work on my breath control, I can hear the pitch drop after the second “Specialty Pharmacy” very clearly, I will work on that. Thanks again! Very helpful.

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59630
    mkell755
    Participant

    You are welcome! Happy Holidays to you as well!

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59629
    mkell755
    Participant

    Hi Aaron! I liked these reads! You have a nice tone that flows well and is very clear, and each one sounded unique for the script which is great
    Script 1: Good casual attitude, sounded very friendly and your voice had a nice smile in it
    Script 2: Good smooth rich tone in this one. There were some pauses that did not make sense to me “we prefer a glass” vs. how you read it as “we…prefer a glass”, minor point
    Script 3: Great energy! I could hear the smile in your voice and you had a great sense of enthusiasm. I think this was my favorite for you. Great job!

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59628
    mkell755
    Participant

    Hi John, good reads! They all flowed well and were very clear.
    Script 1 – I liked this one for your voice. It had a sense of mystery about it.
    Script 2 – This topic was good also for your voice.
    Script 3 – I liked the enthusiasm for this read, but it sounded like you raised your voice in pitch more for this one, which did not sound as natural to me as for the other 2 scripts. There was a longer than needed pause right after “…how candy is really made.” Overall very good!

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59626
    mkell755
    Participant

    Hello all! Here is a recording for any and all of your feedback (recorded on my phone). Thanks all!

    Mary

    Walgreen’s Specialty Pharmacy
    At Walgreens Specialty Pharmacy, we provide the convenience of a one-stop approach for all your prescription needs. Using Walgreens Specialty Pharmacy enables our clinical pharmacists to review your entire patient profile, so we can identify potential harmful drug interactions and other conflicts that may result from using multiple pharmacies. The Walgreens Specialty Pharmacy care team—from pharmacists and nurses to insurance advocates—is ready to provide the personalized, supportive, and dependable care that meets your unique needs.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59625
    mkell755
    Participant

    Thanks for the feedback Kathy. Good point on emphasizing breakfast instead of entire, especially because the point seems to be to let the listener know there is moree than just bread on the menu. Thanks again!

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59624
    mkell755
    Participant

    Thanks for the feedback Kathy! I will try that and let you know how it goes. Thanks!

    Mary

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59591
    mkell755
    Participant

    Hello all! Here is my recording for tonight (recorded on my phone). Thanks for any and all feedback!

    Mary

    Birds Eye: Cheddar Broccoli Bake
    Introducing the Cheddar Broccoli Bake from Birds Eye. A creamy, gooey, melty, deliciously decadent way to eat broccoli….Yes Please! Birds Eye – a new twist on veggies.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #59590
    mkell755
    Participant

    Hi Kathy! Thanks for the feedback! I will work on those unintended micro-pauses, thanks again for listening!

    Mary

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