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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #105231
    Jbjasco
    Participant

    Hi folks could use some feedback. I’m in the Chicagoland region trying to get representation. Dream come true would be to do voice work for Disney. I’m either getting no replies or rejection letters. I know it’s common but it’s getting to the point I feel like something’s missing. Any help would be appreciated.

    Also if I can have feedback on my web page I’d greatly appreciate that as well.

    About Jerry Jascoviak

    Thanks in advance 🙂

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    • #105235
      Jbjasco
      Participant

      So for whatever reason I can’t upload my WordPress. The page url is located on my resume also.

  • #105095
    Ibby Cerna
    Participant

    Hi! I would love some non-technical feedback on the two commercials below! New to voiceover 🙂

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    • #105143
      Taylor Grissom
      Participant

      Great job on these takes Ibby! For Kim Crawford: Your voice sounds super warm and comforting. I also think you had some good variety in pitch which helped keep my attention. When you say “…or our time” it sounds like you’re pronouncing “our” as “are” if that makes sense. I know we often pronounce it as “are” in conversation, but I’ve been directed to try to say it more like “hour”.

      For Zillow: I like the pacing of this one! When you say “fees” I heard you pitch up at the end and it almost made it sound like a question. Maybe try a take where you sound a little more certain in your tone about what you’re saying.

  • #104907
    tjburnz
    Participant

    Comment as you want in whatever what you deem helpful. Thanks for any feedback to help me improve my reads, set-up, and sound.

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    By mid-1940, the German Army had conquered all of western Europe. H****r was tightening the noose around Britain. In the Atlantic, German U-boats were decimating Allied convoys, threatening to cut off Britain’s only lifeline. But Churchill had a secret weapon, the strangest military establishment in the world. Crossword fanatics, chess champions, mathematicians, students and professors, Americans and British, all came here with one common aim: to unlock the secrets of the Enigma, a machine that concealed Germany’s war plans in seemingly unbreakable code. If Enigma could be penetrated, everything H****r plotted would be known in advance. At Bletchley Park, there unfolded one of the most astonishing exploits of the Second World War.

    There is no perfect running shoe, partly because no two feet are alike, even on the same person. Still, top brands can be comfortable, safe, and effective running mates — if you know what to look for. This video gives you some practical guidelines to help you find shoes that will serve you well in the long run. If in doubt, don’t buy. Shoes should feel just right in the store. Don’t count on improvements after they’re “broken in.” Take your time to buy. Try to shop when business is slow so you won’t feel embarrassed about trying on many pairs of shoes. Buying in haste is a good way to end up with poorly fitting shoes that can cause injuries.

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  • #104773
    STDCjubail
    Participant

    Thank you for the detailed overview of the Power BI consulting services, particularly your focus on time-series data analysis. The use of DAX for key calculations such as moving averages and exponential smoothing, alongside the integration of advanced tools like Python and R for predictive modeling with ARIMA, is impressive. It’s clear that these capabilities, combined with dynamic visualization techniques like line charts, area graphs, and slicers, provide a robust platform for businesses to forecast performance, manage inventories, and optimize resource allocation effectively. The interactive dashboards facilitating real-time decision-making are particularly beneficial. I appreciate the insights you’ve shared and look forward to exploring how we might integrate these services into our operations to enhance our data-driven decision-making processes.

  • #104661
    Ibby Cerna
    Participant

    Hi! I am new to voice over & this is my first time posting here. I would love some non-technical feedback on the two commercials below! Would love to know how I am doing on pace & flow, in addition to emphasis on key words, while not sounding choppy. Thank you!

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  • #104658
    VOgalUS
    Participant

    Hi All,

    I have been working on VO for a couple of years. Its been all about technology, industry, narrating and anything else about VO. I am more comfortable with these and would like to get feedback on the sound only of a recording. An RX stack was created for me and is used on this recording. I’d like to not be so concerned about the sound for a while and work more on my narration and auditioning. Any feedback is welcome but I’d like to know the sound is ok and I am at least competitive soundwise.

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  • #104561
    tamara37
    Participant

    Hello I’m new to voice-overs. I welcome voice delivery feedback as I’m still setting up a home studio. Thank you and wishing everyone success!

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    • #105089
      Ibby Cerna
      Participant

      Hi Tamara, You have a lovely voice! The Louis Vuitton one is great – I wonder if you could use a bit more range in this one, by playing with some some higher pitches in there. I also listened to the North Carolina one. I love how I can hear the smile in your voice on this one. I would be curious how this would sound if you sped up the pace on this one ever so slightly. Great work!

      • #105338
        tamara37
        Participant

        Thank you for the helpful feedback! I really appreciate it!

    • #104965
      tamara37
      Participant

      Additional samples from practice!

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  • #104305
    donna77
    Participant

    Hi everyone,
    I’m interested in any feedback on the attached – I am particularly interested in hearing if the alternate takes have enough variety/point of view and if the reads are conversational. I’m open to any other feedback, including technical, as well. Here are the specs for the spot:

    “For this spot, you’ll be playing a young mother looking for life insurance. We’re striving for levity and, more importantly, authenticity. I encourage you to find nuance in your performance and work with a finer brush than you may be used to. Keep in mind as well that this spot falls somewhere between a comedy and drama. It’s serious, but not heavy; it’s sweet and lighthearted, but not necessarily funny.”

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  • #104202
    Taylor Grissom
    Participant

    Hi all! Happy New Year! Would love any non-technical feedback you’d be willing to provide on these commercial reads for Chime and Nickelodeon Hotels. Thank you so much for your help!

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    • #104307
      donna77
      Participant

      Hi Taylor,
      Really nice reads! I think for the Chime spot you could play with differentiating the beginning, middle and end of the spot a bit more to give the important pieces their own feeling (I hope that makes sense!).

      I really liked the variety in your Nickelodeon Hotels spot and the warmth/excitement in your voice. I think you could slow down the tiniest bit (I lost the end of the word accommodation for example) and I’d give a little beat before the final line so it has more punch.
      Hope that helps! 🙂
      Donna

  • #104149
    Catherine Heitman
    Participant

    Hello, all, and Happy New Year! I’m hoping to get feedback on my delivery on a couple of narration reads. Also, I’ve been trying to improve my noise floor and practicing my editing. I’d appreciate any feedback on those, as well. Thank you!

    Catherine

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