[TIm Sullivan]

Good reads!

For BMS, I know it’s a more serious topic, but it felt slow. Some advice I’ve received is to smile when reading (it makes a difference) and mark where you plan to take a breath. There were some unneeded pauses (between “bodies” and “and” in the first sentence, for example). Planning your breaths will help with that.

Motorcycle had a better pace – it sounded like you were enjoying the topic. One word that was a little rushed was “experience.” Take your time on long words.

You have a very engaging tone.