[Emily Gauthier]

Good Afternoon Keith!

I’d just like to start with I love your voice! It is very smooth and pleasant to listen to!

I’d say that it feels like there are some unnecessary pauses, such as “because…it’s not only about studying”. Pauses to me are used to emphasize the information you want the audience to remember, such as slowing down with X*X. However, with the sentence I highlighted, I only remember the “because” more than the slogan because the slow down puts emphasis on that.

Great job overall!