[AlexS]

Hi, Earthbul. Man, your timbre is enviable for this type of copy. I think if you address just a couple of issues, I’m ready to tune into this nature special: (1) I hear several clicks and some juiciness in your narration–edit these out for smoothness or try another take with these mouth-noises in mind; and (2) I believe if you slow your pace down a bit to allow me to absorb the visuals of your narration (and images that would be on screen) that would make your good read greater. Well done! Best, Alex