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[Declan Waters]

Hello,

I like your style, and I think you got the -talking to other Moms- tone down, well done
I think you could use more inflexion on your question phrases, it was just a tad flat. Examples: “My kids? / You know?” Maybe inflect higher up on the word ‘kids’ and try both down and up for ‘know’

Hope that helps!