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Good Evening!

I have another recording that I’m posting here for practice. It’s a conversational commercial.

My focus is on diction, keeping the reading at a steady pace with little unnatural pausing, and making sure the reading has a beginning/middle/end. I’m not too worried about the breathing, and I do apologize if my mouth sounds dry!

Feedback of any kind is much appreciated. Thank you for your time!

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