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Good Afternoon!

Doing some more practice to help keep myself on track.

Since I’ve last been here, I’ve spruced up my place with a little soundproofing, so hopefully things sound better here.

It’s a commercial script, with a conversational feel. I’m trying to evoke a beginning, middle, end, as well as making sure my pronunciation of words are clear and sound.

Any and all feedback are much appreciated, thank you for your time!

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