Reply To: Feedback Forum
Homepage › Forums › Click here for the Feedback Forum! › Feedback Forum › Reply To: Feedback Forum
September 9, 2022 at 5:53 pm
#79870
Silver Wit
Participant
I enjoyed your Tilex read, but I feel like you could’ve added a bit more annoyance or disgust in the beginning. The mildew is GROSS and I think a little emphasis on that would help.