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RCampos
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Very nice variety in tone and pitch throughout your read, which keeps the topic interesting. I have just two small critiques: I thought your pause just before “broken in” could be a tiny bit shorter. And, you say a long “a” when you say, “is a good way.” I think it would sound more conversational to use a short “a,” like we usually do in conversation.