[SuperLuke]

Hi Audrea.
I liked the copy of the eLearning. You have a nice voice. Maybe work on breath support so that you can perform the copy without unnecessary pauses in between the sentences. I could hear some breathiness and pauses between words at times. I think that can easily be fixed by trying the copy a couple of different ways, like having more emphasis on keywords that the listener of the ad needs to hear. Maybe sound more dynamic, adding some more energy to the copy that can be informative, interesting, and hold the listener’s attention. I’m sure you can find the right pace that works for you.