[Gill]

Hi
Your sound isn’t too bad, I think I may have heard some reverb but overall nothing to significant. Your tone starts out good for this read but maybe because there’s not much change in inflection the script sounds a bit read. I’m not getting a good sense of your connection to it. I hear some areas where you are over enunciating, its a little distracting to the script and takes my attention away from what you are saying. Just a few things to consider with this. Keep at it!