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chloeblackstone
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Hi y’all! I would appreciate any feedback on this virtual campus tour video copy I’m considering for my narration demo. What could I do to improve this read? Thanks in advanced for listening!

-Chloe

“The Rutgers New Brunswick Campus, on the banks of the Raritan river, is located in Central New Jersey. One hour from New York City, Philadelphia, the Jersey Shore and Ski Resorts! The 22,00 acre Rutgers Community includes 5 residential campuses with a variety of settings, from Farmland, to a traditional northeastern college setting with historic ivy covered stone halls. Students enjoy green lawns, campus quads, and vibrant student centers. plus, a college town with boutiques, shops, four-star restaurants, hotels, and a theater district just a short walk away.”

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