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Good Evening.

I have with me another recording, as homework per my instructor.

Hopefully the sound quality is okay- I’m not sure what’s going on tonight, but it seemed like there was a tremor while recording, no matter what I did. Also, the beginning was mistakenly cut off… but I really like this take, and didn’t want to get rid of it, so…

This was initially a gameplay trailer, but I think the on-screen scripty worked well enough to warrant a recording. Once again, I need to make sure I’m exhibiting a feeling of conversation, as well as elements of a beginning/middle/end, so hopefully you can feel that here.

I’m a little embarrassed, given the context, but my instructor recommends me find scripts of things I really like. Feedback and criticism of any kind is much appreciated!

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