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Logan DFD
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I’d appreciate some helpful feedback on these two commercial scripts I’ve been practicing with! Thanks!

HelloFresh

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And who doesn’t love that?
So gather round.
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Earthbound Farm


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And while farming organically may cost more, we think you’ll find Earthbound Farm organic produce is an infinitely better value.
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Now and for years to come.
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