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November 30, 2021 at 8:31 pm
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Hi, everyone! I would love to get some feedback on this documentary-type read about beavers. Thanks!
Script: The b****r builds its lodge out of intertangled twigs and sticks; as freezing weather nears, they plaster their lodge with mud, making a concrete layer that no predator can break through. During the early nineteenth century, the b****r pelt was the single most valuable commodity; the pelt being used for robes, coats, clothing trims, and top hats.