[jwreickel]

Hello!

I like your professional tone and I think you are reading these very articulately. I do think the Advance Technologies script is a little fast, and you may want to emphasize the name of the company (I know it’s fake but trying to highlight the company itself a little for a read like this is likely going to be appreciated for real applications).

I really liked the second read, specially the first few sentences. It seems a little sped up near the end but I thought this one was really good.

Sincerely,

Jimmy