[jwreickel]

Good afternoon Steve,

Thanks for sharing! I would upload each file separately so it’s easier to listen to specific portions or to repeat a single read and I’ve copied some feedback about each script below as it sounded to me.

Thanks!

Jimmy

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Advance Technologies

Well paced but I feel like you sped up a little in the ‘This software is designed to offer you accurate informaiton about company policies and procedures’ part. I would also try to make the ‘your job is important to us’ especially soothing and reassuring

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Educational Explainer- Real Estate

This was my favorite of the three, I thought this was much more conversational than the first one, and I like the emphasis on MAYBE like is in the script.

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Financial Engines

Maybe a little fast, especially near the end.