[Erik B]

Hi Sylvanie,

I checked out your reads, and here are my thoughts.

Social Security – good pace to the read. Watch out for the glottal stop b/w Administration and in the third sentence. You hit the key words nicely. You sounded a little tense/rigid in this read. Imagine you are talking to somebody to help the read sound more fluid.

Top of the Rock Observation Deck – good tone, good voice, you hit key words nicely. This read sounds great. Very good job.