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September 21, 2021 at 12:48 pm
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Hi Notetaker 32,
I checked out your reads, and wanted to share my notes with you.
Ionizing Radiation – very good tone, watch out for the glottal stop b/w “radiation and”.
Explainer Video for Website – good tone. The second question/sentence sounds a bit rigid/robotic. Also watch out for the glottal b/w “Performance and Predictability”.
Overall solid job.