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[Erik B]

Hi Notetaker 32,

I checked out your reads, and wanted to share my notes with you.

Ionizing Radiation – very good tone, watch out for the glottal stop b/w “radiation and”.

Explainer Video for Website – good tone. The second question/sentence sounds a bit rigid/robotic. Also watch out for the glottal b/w “Performance and Predictability”.

Overall solid job.