[hharris]

Hi Gary,

Great sounding recordings and good choices for your voice. Your tone comes off as very sincere in the A1 commercial. The A1 ending didn’t feel like an end statement to me – felt like it could be more to that commercial. Maybe try the last phrase in different rhythms?

The Pepsi production and read were great. I think you can bring even more energy to the Pepsi spot without it being over the top – your voice is well suited for this spot. Thanks for sharing!