[Erik B]

Hi Sara, I enjoyed both reads, I’ll share with you my notes for each read after listening a couple of times.

Creativity – great tone, good pacing, emphasized key words well.

Starbucks – great tone, good pacing, emphasized key words nicely, liked in particular, “”world’s finest fresh-roasted whole bean coffees.”

Great job, you’re going to do well with your demo. Thumbs up.