[mara_sherman]

I think you have a great voice and the right idea with this script, it just needs a little finesse. You start off nice and slow and relaxing, and then kind of speed up and take us out of the relaxation. Try keeping it at the same chill pace throughout and use pitch modification to highlight what’s relaxing about Bermuda. Look up some pictures of Bermuda beaches to get you in that mindset and try reading it at a moderately slow pace throughout and I think it will naturally come out really nicely from your voice and natural inflection.